All Comments on 'My Mom Is An High-Class Escort Ch. 01'

A lot less than what l expected. Awful!

1/5

???

Totally useless,too short. I hope there's more to the next chapter!!

Not going read other parts of this awful story.

More please.

A ridiculous story told by a semi-literate non- writer. You should try a different time sink and spare the rest of us.

How did her kid not know to put gloves on before he touched her?

It is lacking. I detest a cliffhanger without any content. I'm sure you can do better that this.

That short thing wasn't worth the time to open.

Did you forget to upload the rest of this story? It cuts off abruptly on an unnecessary paragraph break with no sense of completion. The dialogue and narration are also horrendous. Please get a proofreader to help you.

p00r grasp 0f language and gender

Terrible.

Get your mind working before you put your pen to paper. Use your mind to imagine yourself as part of the story. Imagine it, feel it and be one of the characters. Look at the family members who will be at the center of the story, and if you are permitted play a roll with one who is willing to take part to make your story worth while in it's reading.

The Old Codger

This was not a story but the introduction. It was to my way of thinking the beginning to the main story which would have certainly included the son. It had to include him for he would have become her blew up doll. Something to practice upon, perhaps new moves and the like.

At the ripe old age of 91 I can only read about such things. And heck even the films are questionable as to their being real.

The only positive thing about them is that they bring back memories of a past era. Still they keep me amused for a while.

A very old Codger.