All Comments on 'My Mom - My Lover Ch. 01'

Okay, it was based on a 'true' story and you didn't want to take too many liberties. It would have been better if you had.

There was very little eroticism or sexual tension between the mother and son and that is needed for a story to work.

The mistakes also kept taking me out of the story. A simple one to take note of for your future output: "It's good to be home mom." This should be: "It's good to be home, Mom."

Names and titles are always capitalized and there should be a comma before them.

Mom wanted me to take charge, by not didn't we wasted three years. I was just afraid she'd regret cheating on dad. Years later we both figured he knew everything from the beginning of teasing to making love.

a woman should serve her husband and/or son

As someone else said, there was VERY little eroticism in this.

What I read was not domination, it was straight out ABUSE.

There was no seduction or enticement. All I saw was anger and subjugation.

with rape and physical abuse of women- while the story may be true it was shameful

My mom enjoys the verbal abuse from my dad so I guess I need to be more aggressive if I want her myself

I have to agree with others, it was rape, disrespect, and abuse. He deserves some good old fashioned retribution from Mom. I've seen enough women who have been treated like that in my career; hated it then and hate it now! gave it 2* only for the possibility of PTSD. True or not, it was wrong!

You people getting all worked up about shit. It's just a story. SMDH

This just comes across as an abuse story. Son rapes mom, disrespects her verbally and is vicious with the name-calling. I don,t see how this becomes a love story.

It was definitely nonconsensual at first. She wanted to have him in control, and was relishing it. Her physical response said that. There is no enjoyment in a rape. She just needed to learn that she wasn't in charge.

I'd like to see him train his mother and father in their proper roles. Maybe even improve their relationship.

I'm kind of in the fence about the whole abuse/rape thing. I'll see what happens in the next chapter.

DAMN dud you made me nut 100% HOT

Im tickled about all the responses. Several of u stated she was raped. There was no intercourse in this chapter by him. He gave her a spanking with the belt. Told her like it was made her suck his dick forcefully and manhandled her, If anything it was nonconsenual

He needs to make over the top exclamations to be dominant? The feel was someone who wanted to be taken seriously, but usually isn't.

Rape and should not be here!

So do y'all not read tags before you start a story?