by silkstockingslover
Nooooo! This can't be 'The End', Jasmine. I know this is an entry for the Hallowe'en competition, (and I hope you win) but this lovely tale is surely ripe to be continued? Barbara and Simon simply have to have a threesome with 'Betty Boop', and don't forget about 'Mrs. Walker' either! I'm sure she'd appreciate a good fucking. This hot Hallowe'en tale gets 5 stars from me.
Adds a whole new meaning to Coitus Interruptus. 🫣
Nice little one shot. Hope you win.
A great story, I think the son picked the correct party to stay, and come with lasting benefits. It seemed a shame it had to end so soon
Wounded what mom is going to say or due next? The door is open please next chapter.
Loved it, nothing like a young boys fresh cock.
What in mum going to say, or do?
Can't wait.
Anna
I agree, there is so much more that could be told about Simon and all the sexy MILFs we have seen so far. I can just see him becoming the fuck toy for all of his parents sexy friends. Some other thoughts come to mind but I will keep them to myself for now. 5star story for sure.
The first time I had sex it was with a 28 year old married friend of my mother when I was 18. Loved your story.
Its like you took all your leftovers and pieced them together to make this story. You have too much writing talent to lower your standards. Disappointed.
Looking forward to part two of this one jasmine, as always a sublime story full of mischief and details xx
I agree with Annalovesit
Loved it, I assume mum will want to play?
What in mum going to say, or do? Please write a lot more soon.
Chuck239
Cliffhanger is bad for a one-off contest entry. Would have been been better with a different ending, or just stop a sentence sooner.
Love the story…well written….highly erotic……and almost believable, if my groin was any indicator. More please and thanks.
I agree with the other commentors about this story, I LOVE IT! that last paragraph does leave a lot of questions about what happens next, such as 'does mom drop to her knees and clean her son off?' ' does mom eat the cream pie from her best friend?' ' does dad join in later with son in a foursome?' ' does mom quietly accept the situation between son and friend or does she go nuclear on her friend?' I know it is a Halloween contest story and the very last line says 'The End' but I can definitely see it as chapter 1 of a continuing story line.
Continue the story with Simon fucking his mom and then Mrs. Walker his teacher from school.
Great ending to a well written story (as always). Nice to see it continue, but it could happily stop there and avoid becoming clichéd.
Hopefully mom sees the cum running out of her pussy & buries her face in it. Please write a few more chapters.
Continue. This needs to be continued in Incest with both women. Part 3 as a foursome with dad.
5 solid stars!!! This is so hot, it could go several different directions. Please send a few more chapters.
Lots of new readers enjoying your stories but for us old timers your stories are interchangeable, just with different names. But you are building a new reading audience so congrats.
Nut is it really the end? Hmmmm. Knowing you, I am not so sure. I certainly hope it's not the end!
great story. would prefer he fucks his teacher and any other older woman rather than his mother
Short and sweet is a treat BUT a sequel would be nice. Well written as usual.
Great story. Would love to read more of their adventures. And will read more of your stories.
(10/22/2023) Oh please..., let there be a part two! What's Momma going to do? Hey, that rhymes.
One of your best. Five stars. Writing as if Simon, the 18-year-old, had written it was genius. It's as if he is telling the story to one of his friends - maybe Elizabeth! I loved the cunnilingus and toe-sucking. Thanks, Jas. But maybe next time one of your MILFs can slake her lust with the 78-year-old neighbor. We (old guys) are horny too, And we have extensive experience at feet and toesicles worship, cunt munching, and other lewd and lascivious acts.
Reminds me all so much of all the times I fucked my mom's best friend .... Larry Smith
"Then I heard a cough, and looked around to see my Mom smiling.
"You didn't think my best friend wouldn't tell me did you?
Now how about giving Mommy some of that cock?"
But before I could answer, she started sucking Barbara's pussy.
"You taste better than your dad."
This was going to be fun :)
As always I e joy your stories. This was a welcome surprise as it came out on my b-day. That said hopefully you are considering a follow up as it truly deserves one. Great job as always
Pretty good tale that seems to be a Part 1 of a continuing story about a young guy who has learned some startling facts about his parents while having his 1st sexual experience with a MILF friend.
Part 1 - if it is - ends with his mother catching him balls deep in her friend, just revealed as her sometimes lover... and after she high-fived the MILF who was on her way to bang her son.
Five stars for this, but I'd love to read the next part foe more revelations from the MILF about his parents as he becomes more accomplished in the bedroom !
This could be a very fun story to continue...
The end.......? What? Mom needs to lick his cock clean then clean out Barbra's pussy while her son is banging her from behind!!! Please continue this story. There are some other ways it can go. Very good!!!
This story was totally awesome and amazing. You definitely have to keep this going.
There’s still his hot teacher and mom to join in on the fun. Have read some of your other stories and you definitely have a talent for this. Please keep up the great work.
My mates mum was the first person to ride my cock on the bog at the same time she told me what her and her two sisters were going to do to me when I was in the bath with that I shot my load but it went in her mouth so I asked her if she could show me what the three of them were going to do to me... And trust me when I say I could see why she wanted me in the bath fuck I love how much waste a mature women has in her body
Great story although too short ending left wanting more ie what happened when Simon's mum caught them
You have wrote another part where the mom already knew what she was going to do and maybe bring the mom into the action but leaving the dad out