by Asperger27
doug need to beat the shit out of seth with a bat, and fuck his mom and aunt.
I was hoping that Doug would do something, take a turn, but it looks like he's going to stay that way. That sad.
This tale is wonderful, congratulations, but this jump in time I think was very bad, there were many loose ends.
Doug could have a greater weight in this, not accepting this and even taking revenge on the three, but unfortunately with the direction he is going, there will be no turnaround.
Apart from that once again congratulations on this wonderful tale.
Great setup in the series but missed on the follow through. Could have been a great story of slow seduction of a pair of sisters and the slow transition from embarrassing denial to degrading reveal to submissive humiliating acceptance for Doug. Could have strung Doug along with suggestion and sexy photos and video (all explainable as Seth spying - a picture of her in a thong, getting dressed in a tiny bikini, video of her showering, etc) that would cause Doug to jack off to while still denying Seth's threats. Could have had Seth get some blackmail on Doug (video jacking off to mom?) to force him to actually encourage his mom/aunt's submission. Could have had Seth separately seduce Maria, then dominantly force them to be with each other in service to his cock - complete with reluctantly eating creampies from each other. But instead Maria, already angry with Seth, falls IN LOVE with him after just SEEING his cock?! Could have watched Monica start seeing Seth's dad and Doug hope for saving by trying to expose Seth's behavior and Monica's betrayal to Seth's dad, only to have it result in even more humiliation for Doug. Could have had a wedding and honeymoon where Doug is forced to come as valet. Could have had Seth begin denying his bitches his cock if they dont... help humiliate Doug, fuck Seth's friends, find him new cunts to fuck, etc. Even could have had Seth help Doug find a girlfriend as a favor for "giving" his mom/aunt to Seth (after maybe a ritual where Doug has to beg his mom/aunt to fuck Seth) - a girl that seems to find Doug cute and flirts/teases him sexually, but only teases, only to find she too is submissive to Seth's massive cock.
So much potential and it feels like a great concerto introduction that turns into a preschool nursery rhyme by the end.
You don't have a bit of originality. All you do is rip off ntr hentia mangas and dump them as your stories. Pathetic.
The mom and aunt in this story are nothing but cunt sluts. The not only do not love Doug but they hate him. The Mom and Aunt have destroyed his life and resigned him to a lifetime of thearpy and mental illness.
The story had its ups when during the trip the mom was being seduced, but once they came back I think it went to fast with the aunt getting seduced too quickly, from that point on the mom and aunt became addicted sluts too quickly, and the fact that after the talk the mom had with Doug in the park, he was too fast to forgive her, he should have just stayed mad at her telling her that he promises on his father's grave that he'll hate her for the betrayal, thus making her say she give up fucking the bully, only making her and the aunt fall even harder as they try to hide it from him until he finds out about her lies!!!
It's like you are telling my life story here to be honest, I get a kick out of reading these stories on this site because of the new ideas it gives me but this one was literally like a flashback! Wow
Why wasn't Monica bothered by having her son watch her and Seth have an intimate moment?. It said that she was disgusted when Seth had Doug watch him creampie her until she later got used to doing it in front of Doug. But during the threesome with Seth, Monica and Maria, by that point she would have been disgusted having intercourse with Seth.
If Monica and Maria are pregnant with Seth's kids then wouldn't Doug be their brother and cousin?. I understand him being the kids' cousin since Maria is his aunt but Monica is his mom and not his sister so he'd be the kids' brother and cousin instead of their uncle.
Will there be another threesome between Monica, Maria and Seth?. If so can Maria and Monica have a Sisterly intercourse with each other?. That'd be hot, especially if they brought a strap-on for the threesome.
"Then he kicks my gut hard. I groan and my head hits the head."
What did Doug mean when his head hit the head?
The pizza girl sounds like a Young Monica, wonder if she'll be apart of Seth's harem.
Would love to read a long chapter focused solely on Monica, Maria, and Seth. There needs to be a sister-sister moment between Monica and Maria with them trying to dominate the other to please Seth.
Couldn't Doug expose Seth, Monica, and Maria by showing John (Seth's father) the video Seth sent to Doug in Chapter 4?. We know that Doug delated the photo of Maria covered in Seth's cum but we didn't get anything on him deleting the video of Seth and Monica. In fact, Doug could recover the photo of Maria covered in Seth's cum because the photo would be in the trash part on his phone and deleted photos don't get deleted until 30 days.
Why did Monica suck Seth's cock after he shoved it up her pussy, Maria's ass, and piss? Wouldn't she worry about getting an infection?
Could there be a remake of this story with more time being spent of Monica, Maria, and Seth being a poly couple? Would love to read about Maria and Monica playing with each other.
Idea: After Monica and Maria give birth, they get into a threesome with Seth again and Seth shoves his cock up one of the sisters' ass and pussy and has the other one suck the juices off his cock.
There needs to more chapters focused on threesomes between Seth, Maria and Monica. They'd make for erotic chapters.
There needs to be a continuation, I have a feeling the next chapter will be the last one or at least close.
The threesome between Seth, Monica and Maria needed to be longer with the two sisters having incest with each other and licking each other's pussy, sucking boobs, kissing while tonguing, shoving fingers up pussy and ass, and licking each other's ass. Maybe Monica could have squirted on Maria's face like she did with Seth on their trip while Maria could either cum or pee on Monica's face.
@Asperger27 this story and "Conflicted" by Cuckoldson are the most erotic Mom and Bully porn stories I've ever read.
Maybe you could make another story with the bully having sex with the Mom, her sister, Mom's friend, and however many girls the bully has been with to build a harem. You know, change things up a bit.