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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

terrible, even for ´murrican english...

NewTeachersPetNewTeachersPetabout 3 years ago
Really tightly written story.

I mean, from the first paragraph you know what's going to happen. Leading us to the end was the real fun. What a sleeze. Something bad has to happen to him; redemption is an absolute necessity. Hope you tell us about the following six months.

finegoldwinefinegoldwineabout 3 years ago
And?

Need to finish story...as previous comment what happened during the six month Odyssey...

TKFranksTKFranksabout 3 years ago

What happens next?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
out of this world good

so well written. perfectly describes a situation that has happened to so many. amazing

blackice51blackice51over 3 years ago
OUTSTANDING STORY!!! 5 STARS!!!

So how did the 6 months ended? Hopefully the dick head Trey got the worse of it. Absolutely HOT story, thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
★★★★★ (5.0). 👍👍! ❤.

:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

This is the first porn story I ever read. Amazing

racfguyracfguyover 3 years ago
Trey

is an asshole

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
It was a good story

A good interesting story that has strong elements of reality along with some strange details. Trey's comment that Jessica "would have told her mom by now if she was going to" was very perceptive on his part and could likely be true under such circumstances. Her pretending to be asleep while he groped her seemed like a valid attempt at a defense mechanism. Jessica's fear that her infatuated mother would believe Trey instead of her made good sense. Afterall, Trey was a handsome man with a big cock who was fucking the mom's brains out on a frequent basis. Jessica's attempts to avoid him seemed reasonable. Her perception of Trey seemed realistic. She thought Trey was a handsome, well built man, but she found his personality to be creepy. She was embarrassed to listen to her mom and Trey have mind blowing sex, though she eventually accepted it. The handsome Trey fucking Jessica's mom so regularly with such enthusiasm strongly implied that the mom was a hottie and true MILF, which explained frrom where Jessica got her looks. Even her clueless boyfriend working her up and then not satisfyiing her rang true. Jessica's irritation and slight jealousy of her friend Riana getting fucked so well, after her own dissatisfaction came across as realistic.

What didn't ring true was that Jessica had been dating Shawn for 4 months. She was presented as a good student who was an accomplished athlete with an outstanding body. It was noted that she thought "she could compete with any girl in the school for being hot." So why is she with a skinny short guy who has a regular (at best) cock, who isn't overly smart, and who had poorly fucked her in the past? His most notable feature was he dressed like a rock fan and was the opposite of her in appearance, behavior, interests, and physique. Why isn't Jessica with some big strong athlete who was similar to Trey in build? or with an intelligent boy from one of her classes? It is mentioned that this was the first year at the school for the boyfriend. New guys at a high school, who aren't good looking, aren't smart or an outstanding student, who are short and skinny, and are not athletic DO NOT arrive at the school and become the boyfriend of such a gorgeous athletic girl! Another testimony to Jessica's attractiveness and sexy appeal is that Trey, who was presented as looking like Tom Selleck and a stud, wanted her so much.

The story happens during the school year, so is the pool party on a Friday or Saturday night? If not, then midnight is late to come home on a school night. If a weekend, midnight seems early for her mom to be so asleep that she doesn't hear anything. With Jessica gone, the mom and her stud would be banging each other's lights out. Also, the story says Jessica has a reputation as a "good nice girl". How does she keep that reputation hanging out with her friend Riana, who the "whole school knows, she screws all the time". Plus her other friend Carry knows and advised her that "talking dirty makes boys cum quicker". Implication was that Carry's conclusion wasn't based on the reaction of a single boy.

Jessica's initial reaction to Trey in the kitchen, when she came home, made sense. His grabbing her was in line with the storyline. That Jessica, who had gotten excited and left hanging by Shawn, was horny and would respond to Trey was plausible and maybe probable. It was funny though, that to get more privacy, Jessica suggested they leave the kitchen and go to her room NEXT to HER MOM'S ROOM. If Jessica could clearly hear her mom fucking, then the mom would hear Jessica and Trey. That the mom didn't hear them and barge into Jessica's room was a miracle.

From the mom's behavior to Riana's reaction to meeting Trey, on to Jessica's eventual orgasms with him - there was no doubt that Trey was a desirable, handsome and studly man. Yet the author kept him realistic and didn't turn Trey into a giraffe with an unrealistic fencepost for a cock. It was called huge and "intimidating". Jessica wondered if it would fit but it didn't terrify her. She felt stretched but in a good way. Fanciful and ridiculous dimensions were not used. "8 inches long and quite thick" is very large but not unknown. Her being "amazed to see that I couldn’t get my whole hand around it", added to the realism. A girl's hand, even a large hand, rarely measures 6 inches from the tip of the index finger to the end of her thumb, so we can assume his cock was maybe 7 - 7 1/2" in circumference - big but realistic. Meanwhile, Trey didn't immediately piledrive her. He was a selfish lover but acted like a more experienced man would when hoping for more than a one time conquest. All in all, the story was a good one with a believable and reasonable plot. The story flowed nicely. I commend the author for doing a good job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Shy Guy

I have always been a shy reserved guy so rarely made the first move. This story comes across as true. If I had been more 'macho', I'm sure my sex life would have been far more interesting as apparently I was a very good looking guy. Trying to be the nice guy didn't actually work much for me. I notice many respondents here are females who found the story arousing and also several who recount their own true experiences.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
excellent

I could envision his big cock opening her pussy and only going half way to make her more receptive before sticking it all the way up her canal. And then she got his entire shaft stuck deep in her belly. She knew was being mounted by a stud. Perhaps in a later chapter he will plant his seed and make her belly grow. Or plant his seed in both mom and daughter. A breeder.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Y'all must be Democrats

Republicunts only fuck their own daughters, right Donnie?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

SKSKSKSKSK AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

CrazyCanuck65CrazyCanuck65over 3 years ago
Great story!

I really liked this. You slowly built up, the feelings were very believable as was much of the story, situations etc... all felt very believable.

This actually reminded me of a real life situation a close female friend of mine told me about. When she was young her step father hit on her and ultimately had an affair with her. This kept ongoing until he got her pregnant at which time her mother found out who the dad was. Her mom was angry at her and forced her to get an abortion later on around which time she ran away from home and became pretty wild for a while. This is partly why I feel the way you wrote this was very believable. Plus my own mother had several boyfriends and I grew up hearing them having sex every night.

TakeatumblewithmeTakeatumblewithmeover 3 years ago
Amazing read

Honesty I’ve read this story so many times and yet each time I read it I catch myself having to squeeze my legs together until I can find a place to relive the budding excitement and arousal that comes when I read it!

If only there was another chapter or a sequel to it!

I would love to find out what happens.

Brilliant story

lingerie65lingerie65over 3 years ago
Learning how to really get fucked at a young age

my public comic is a very sick one indeed, ever since my very 1st time wearing rositas panties at a young age I enjoy playing with female lingerie, and also enjoying the part where I imagine myself as a female myself a woman wanting to be fucked by a fucked by a didn't come twice, once at 17 and another at 18.

Now at 54 my fantasy of becoming somebody's bitch in sexy lingerie by Victoria's Secret and becoming somebody's bottom is truly taking a hold of me and I can't wait much longer. I want to get on my knees taking someone's beautiful dick in my hand and seeing if my wish came true making it so thick that I can't wrap my fingers around

That beautiful meaty lolli-pop. Seeing his tasty pre-cumm I begin sucking him off with nothing but loving tenderness, joy and lustfilled anticipation of the warm gift l'm about fully taste & swallow to my satisfaction😋

Once I finish cleaning him off, I'll keep him in my hungry mouth until he thickens up for me again. Letting him mount me in and fuck me in missionary position rapping my legs around his waist while driving deeper into me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Had a close encounter once

About ten years ago, my wife and I had an argument so I drove over to my gfs place. Before anyone gets all judgmental we have an open marriage. Anyway she was surprised when I called her that late and asked if I could come over. She was in the middle of a divorce and her kids, a 14 yo son and 17 yo daughter. When I got there she snuck me me sssh me because they were asleep. She made me something to eat and we had drinks as I explained what happened. She said I could stay there the night since I had been drinking. We had sex a couple times through the night and once I felt as if I was being watched. Turns out her daughter woke up and went to see what the noise was. When I went to the bathroom there she was standing in her bedroom doorway wearing only panties as her erect nipples pressing through a tiny t-shirt. She was obviously staring at my still semi erect cock as I darted into the bathroom. When I came out, wrapped now in a towel. She was gone but her door was still open a crack. I could hear the sound of my gf sleeping and for a moment the thought definitely crossed my mind....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great story

Sad in its way, but very non con hit. I've read it many times. Wish you would write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
MY MOM'S BOYFRIENDS ALSO DID MANHANDLED ME!

When my mom was violated seduced by others my dad left her. She was fucked by interracial lowlife bad boys. One of them was our young houseboy helper from the slums. He milked her of money and impregneted her. I also caught him touching my sister inapproriately! Another guy who also milked her money and impregnated spanked me when I resisted him. Another one who wanted to fuck her groped mashed my breasts when he finds me alone, without the knowledge of my mom.

To tell you the truth, these kinds of stories arouses me. Can anyone email me true stories where a lowlife rough black bad boys dominates humiliates milks rich decent white ladies and also violates their daughters innocence? virgintsik1 @ gmail com

BrendaNWBrendaNWabout 4 years ago
Hot !

Thank you for an exciting story, I almost came just imagining that I was Jessica . Ohhh

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Get over yourself

I loved this story. What I don’t get are the people who comment about how this is gross and this is rape, when it’s in the non-consent/reluctant part. Like do you go through this section just to make shit comments? If you don’t like the topic don’t read it. But seriously a good read made me cum several times. I had this fantasy many of times but my mom only dated gross dudes with no game lol

NipkorNipkorabout 4 years ago
Lovely

Sexy story

NightOwl47NightOwl47about 4 years ago
Too easy

I enjoyed the first part of the story when Jessica was at Trey's mercy. I stopped enjoying it when she got home from the pool party and started loving all the attention to her body.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Please please

Please more. This is perfect. Come back. It's never too late.

Luciferz_AngelLuciferz_Angelover 4 years ago
Absolutely Loved it!

I need more😍😍

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Please give us a part 2, so many questions

How will she act around her mom now, and will they fuck on her moms bed? How will she act around him now, will she leave her door unlocked now? Has she accepted her place as his slave? Will he fuck the mother while covered in her daughters juices vice versa? Will he get a threeway with one of her friends? Will her birth control fall through to where she's knocked up? How will they react after making eye contact around her mother? Don't leave us hanging

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Love it: 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 (5)! You did an excellent job!

Your story has so far got 2,763,239 views & 2,,475 favorites (which is a bit short of 1 fav. per 1,000 views). You can be proud of this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Hot hot hot

Such a hot story and so well written

LewisCraneLewisCranealmost 5 years ago
Really hot

Loved the development, you packed a good story and plenty of hot sex into a short space. Very nice.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
I'm cumming for y'all

This is soooo hot! My cock is hard and slippery...

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Please add more

This story just made me cum hard asf. Should definitely add more to it and explain how she acts around him and if the mom ever finds out

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Hope there's a part two

i'm curious to see how she acts around him the next day and as time goes on. it'd be really hot if she gets impregnated and fucked on her moms bed

TakeatumblewithmeTakeatumblewithmeover 5 years ago
Wow! You need to add more!

I have read this story so many times and each time it gets me going early on!

I love how it engages different emotions; you want to feel disgusted with Trey’s behaviour but you are so turned on by it that you can’t help but read on and get busy!

Please please please write more! This has to be 1 of the best if not the best stories I have read on here!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
You are a stupid girl

When you knew that your mothers boy friend was after you, you should have told your mom and if she didn't listen to you then you should have planned a way to get this trey guy to show his true discussing self. You should have never locked your door when he got you to his room also you should have used your leg and a foot a good kick to the groin would have stopped him cold

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Can anyone email me true stories lowlife black bad boys humiliating decent white women?

after reading this i recall how i was molested by my mom's boyfriend long time ago

he fondled my breast. my mom was also impregnated by our squatter slum houseboy helper.

can anyone here email me true stories of lowlife rough black bad boys from the hood forcing orgasm on decent white women turning them into sluts milking cow?

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Take your fictious fantasy and stick it up your ass

What that trey did to his girl friends daughter would construed as rape and no woman would consciously put herself in that position and she should have told her mom when

trey tried the first time. If it was me I would have grabbed his dick and wrenched so hard he would have screamed his cock would have been broken and no longer would have functioned. I would have like you to try it with me and I would guarantee you would screaming aloud with a broken cock or a broken head after the lamp that I would bring down on your head you would be out cold or dead.

chipmonk9chipmonk9almost 6 years ago
Update

Plzzzz add the next ch

Muddy9Muddy9about 6 years ago
Such a hot sexy story!!

I long to find a horny Jessica of my own to use and teach her how a real man fucks

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Very good!

When reading stories the reader should become a part of the story. This story was written to engage the reader. Very good story line. Keep writing as you may write a master piece Solid 5.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Listen up

Ok people if you listened she said "that was the start of a 6 mounth odyssey which almost destroyed my family" meaning hat was when Ithe started it lasted 6 mounths and it almost destroyed her family so the mum must of found out

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
more

say, many chapters later, mom marries Trey and he fucks the Jessica the night before the wedding, an hour before the wedding, and again after the wedding once in the church and again at the reception. I dont like him either, but once she started begging him to fuck her over and over, I'm all for him fucking her in every way as much as possible. It would be cute if Riana joined for a threesome and Jessica got jealous.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I DONT LIKE TREY.

HOW CAN HE BETRAY THAT WOMENS TRUST.

HOW CAN SHE BETRAY HER MOTHERS TRUST. I AM DISGUSTED.

I FELT HORNY READING THIS. IM SO DISGUSTED IN MY SELF.

I DONT EVEN KNOW HOE I GOT TO THIS PAGE 😳😭😭😭😭😭😭.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
This is perfect

I'm actually in a situation where I'm the Jessica...it's fucking fantastic, but he thinks I'm asleep every time..this story is great, I just wish my "Trey" went past eating me out...although I have to say it feels amazing and it definitely helped during finals week.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Audio Recording

This would be terrific as an audio recording with almost any woman's sexy voice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
NEED FUCKING MORE!!!!

I read it twice came 3 times.. every time wanting more. Also wanting him to fuck her tight ass..Need more to the story .. Is she his little cum slut from then on using her when he wants .making her service his buddies.. more MORE BEED NEED MORE. oh he should of made her clean her sweet cunt juice from his cock and balls and to end that with a load of fucking cum on the back of her throat, before his returning to her mom.

WorthlessandAshamedWorthlessandAshamedover 6 years ago
Helpless to stop re-reading this...

What a torturous, base and disgusting account of a young girl doomed to give in to the will of a drunken womanizing pervert, who's power over her mother and household had her instinct to resist his advances weakened with each encounter -no matter how she tried, there was never any real chance of escape...

re-reading it over and over only enforces the reader arousal as the girl loses her will to keep her dignity and instead falls into the disgusting older mans control. His twisted victory and complete domination of the mother and daughter is beyond well told, and leaves one guilty and hungry for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Rest of the Story

There has to be more to this story!

It even ends with "that was the Start of a 6 month..."

Really, I mean, I know it can be difficult to get back to writing mode when you been out of it .... but it is time :-D

* (encouragement) *

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
"layed"

I lied there with Trey’s penis still inside of me, unsure what to do next. The correct word to use would be "layed" awesome story though, hope to read more of it...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Page 3 IS the story

we read through pages 1 & 2 and are rewarded with the hard core sex scene of page 3. Eventhough pages 1 & 2 could have used some of the juice from p3 the author didn't use it. Mom could have been so much nastier when the disgusting bf drills her on p1 but not. The creepy scene of p2's bedroom scene was a bit too creepy, almost painful to read - not sexy or titilating.

Yet we are rewarded with a great stretch of sex between our 2 best developed characters on p3, my only advice would be:

- let her talk dirtier to him to promote his orgasm, go wild

- drop the bush of pubes crap while she is giving head and going for his nuts, spend more time on her sucking his nuts and his over sized sex organ. Take the reader on a tour of his size and manliness, of course his size is important to the thrill factor.

Lastly, some banter between the 2 as they screw. Even throughout all the sex, a large penis banging it's way into a forbidden cherry flavored, ripe snatch like hers is something more to be screamed about from the rooftops.

Not a little, but a whole bunch. He's banging that sweet young thing after she sucked his enormously huge manly cock, after he lapped her lovely tight little womanhood.

Good p3 but I think you missed an unforgettable p3.

Thank you for a good effort. Hope to see more.

In a nut shell, cut the dribble and get them fucking and talking dirty to one another is what too many authors on this site miss.

You're better than most.

TakeatumblewithmeTakeatumblewithmealmost 7 years ago
Please continue!

I love this story!

Please continue it, the first part is just incredible and so hot!

It feels like I've been waiting years for another part of this story haha!

slnovakslnovakalmost 7 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thank you all for the feedback on my story over the years (now 14 years old!). Hopefully, I'll get to the rest of the story soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Sexy Trey

Give this sex machine a bit of chest hair -- he's got a great cock, loads of stamina, and a good supply of man seed. I want the whole package!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Jessica takes her mom's boyfriend away from her

My pussy was literally seeping with pussy juice as I was reading this story.

I had to stop reading it twice so that I could finger my pussy until I could cum

I very seldom give 5 stars to a story but I had to after reading the one

It actually feels like I was Jessica getting fucked.

Thank you for making my day

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
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i have been molested before so please don't ask about me, i just feel a deep throbbing deep down, whenever i read true stories or black comics and watch videos those things happening. The feeling of being wronged but why it gives some reluctant arousal!

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tazz4fun69tazz4fun69almost 7 years ago
more chapters

want to hear more of what happens. mayb her friend Rianna gets fucked by him too. wanna kno on what almost destroyed her family. cant end it like that & make us wonder on what happens or doesnt happen.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Oh my god yes!

Pleeeease write a second part! I need to know what happens next so bad. I need it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Throbbing

My pussycat is throbbing I have always fantasized about this wish J had someone to take my pussycat like that. Dig in my ass and pussy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
THE STORY IS EROTIC. THE PLOT WAS INTELLIGENTLY CONCEIVED. THE STORY WAS VERY WELL CRAFTED.

18 y/o women tend to be vulnerable to pressure of all kinds.

When early in the story the boyfriend entered her bedroom and was touching her ass, she was in a hypnotic transe of sorts. She was totally shocked and was not prepared to deal with such situations. In particular, she could imagine she would be turned on so intensely.

Bravo, sinovak, you did a fine job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Read it twice

He should have taken her cherry ass since he was tongue deep in it and she was getting off on it.

Made me so hot. I'm going to ass fuck myself with a huge cucumber I bought today. I'll be thinking of Trey's big cock stretching me out.

I've had my ass ploughed thoroughly many times. I prefer being fucked in the ass, I guess I'm an ass slut!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
An excellent story

This story had a realness about it, that made it a delight to read.

Ray RobertsRay Robertsover 7 years ago
Great true to life story of the bad stud v innocent young girl

This story identifies and confirms the reality of feminine innocence being overtaken by the pure lust of a rampant stud.

However much you like to define male/female relationships women are subject to being overpowered by a male lothario who is blessed with a large cock and carnal knowledge of what makes the female body work sexually.

While we can all be concerned at the mother/daughter relationship in the story the sexuality overtakes all and this is a great read. I believe both male and female readers will be able to understand and be enthralled by the story which is certainly 5* material. More, please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Ughhh

This is great you should have her and Riana fuck Trey. Have them fuck while the mams asleep in the same room or even have trey make them Mam watch. And have them have public sex

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Side-slut slave

That abrupt ending, while cute, is still a cop-out. This kind of thing has to "play out" over time. I would like to see him make her his side-slut slave. The conflict and the tension are all unresolved from the original story. How he might hold her in his thrall with the mother in the background is a story begging to be told.

peebudypeebudyover 7 years ago
great story

great story. I lived the internal conflict of her simultaneously dispising him, and desiring him. very hot.

LowSwinginLowSwinginover 7 years ago
Finish It

I enjoyed reading this. It's imperfect and it's good.

CrankThzJackInDaBoxCrankThzJackInDaBoxalmost 8 years ago
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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
WET...

....and horny!! LOVED it and gave it 5 stars. The fact that she found him disgusting, but begged him to f*ck her anyway was a huge turn on for me.

Please continue this story.

kisses & wet licks

catt...(Tom's sub/slut in trainning 'shared' wife, and finally loving sex in many ways).

sopharoonessopharoonesalmost 8 years ago
not too sure

frankly the disgust she clearly has for him is too much of a distraction or deterrent from finding this story to be very erotic, it all makes me uncomfortable because she is uncomfortable, fantasy is fantasy for a good reason. the writing itself is ok though, the realism of that is bonus and if its your intention to make the reader uncomfortable then well done. thus im just not to sure how to take this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Pregnant

Maybe make Jessica pregnant in the next story to add some drama? Especially between her mom&trey and Jessica&shawn.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
love it

Please add more to this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Soaked

...what else is there to say?

wdbtchrwdbtchrabout 8 years ago
Very enjoyable

Nice story and well paced, the thing that sent me over the top was a side thought at the point where Trey pushed his cock in her and I remembered she had already been fucked recently by her boyfriend. Sloppy seconds always turn me on.

Hope to see more, maybe with some cream pie eating or sloppy seconds. A cream filled pussy is also good start for fisting. Maybe the girlfriend or mother could take care of that after Trey fucks her again. A little voyeurism is always a nice spice to a story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Ahhh

Ewww. The couch farted!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Awesome

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
more please

wanna find out what happens next. also does he bang the daughter's friend. or even better has an orgy with the mother, daughter & daughter's best friend. please write to this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Loved it

OMG this is soo good. I got super wet from this story. I love the details.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Well written.

Also, to all of the people saying they were disgusted. Think about how some people are disgusted by the things you enjoy sexually. Keep your negative opinions to yourself, that hate could easily be directed at you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
LOL Anon

There aren't any 55 yr old black men named Fuquan. Black folk didn't start making up ridiculous names until about 40 years ago.

TakeatumblewithmeTakeatumblewithmealmost 9 years ago
Please continue this story!

Please write more to This story!

It has so much more to give in my opinion!

It is so hot & sexy..

If I could give me than 5 stars I would!!

JaydiaJaydiaalmost 9 years ago
Damn!

That was so hot it deserves a sequel!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Not sex

That was rape of a vulnerable child .... That her body betrayed her did not lessen the crime.

rapemymouthdaddyrapemymouthdaddyalmost 9 years ago

Mmmmmm, this made me cum so good. Was hoping mom'sboyfriend was going to rape her tight asshole.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Dripping...

im so wet...ur story made my dirty cunt cum soooo many times..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

i just drained my balls to this,,, my gfs daughter is in yard in tight shorts and no bra , i had to cum

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
My opinion

You are a very good writer, your play on words, intrigues, suspense and the rest but you killed it off with the slutty acceptance!

I hope to see a continuation and thus corrections!

Nice one! Its 4-star-rated!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

So she turned out to be a slut, and enjoyed being fucked by her mother's boyfriend no less. What a pitiful character :(

BuzzCzarBuzzCzarabout 9 years ago
A Beginning

...but no ending.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
sam

thats was hot but didnt like the ending hope there will be a continuation up until the 6 months

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Horny

What happened after 6 months? What happened to her family?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Wow

Awesome. PLEASE write a follow up story

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
What happened?

What happened in the next 6 months?

TakeatumblewithmeTakeatumblewithmeover 9 years ago
Amazing

I have read this story over and over again! Please say you are going to write another part to this..

It has everything this kind of story should have on this site.

It would be a shame if a talent like yours goes to waste!

badmolly18fbadmolly18fover 9 years ago

Pretty real to me..... :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Amazing

Mmmmm that was great. I wish that would happen to me

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Real

Some of the stories here are clearly fantasy but the author did a great job of making this one feel real. Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good Job!

Well told!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Somethings are just meant to be

Although i believe she wanted to fuck her mums boyfriend from the very first time she clapped eyes on him lets not judge her for that as we are only too aware young girls that age have shit for brains i should know having been caught fucking and sucking an embarrassingly high amount of my older brothers mates ( i am 22 now and last year at my older brothers wedding it caused much merriment between them that of the 37 mates at the wedding they reckoned only 3 had never been treated to my world famous blow job or fucked my hairless pussy (honestly im such a slut ) but a game lass that i am i took it as a challange and actually fucked the three of them before the reception in a country hotel had really got underway im afraid the Moet had such a terrible effect on my sluttish behaviour always makes me horny the bubbly or was it the pure morrocan coke that i was being treated to anyway there was no excuse being found naked in a room with 2 uncles and 4 nephews that wouldnt have been so bad but there was apparently 7 naked guys queueing for their turn 000ppps

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