by W4444
“I’ll have a couple extra pancakes to go along with all that syrup…”
Believability, strained.
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Very good start. Waiting for chapter 2 now. Lots of questions to be asked and answered. Does dad return though. If mom is as lovely as son says she is, how can dad stay away??
Erotic story of love. Reminds me of how I felt about my late mother.
Please continue. Five stars.
Wonderful story but you rushed the ending. Please have part 2 and let your readers know the future of these two lovebirds!
Nice story blending incest and romance. Looking forward to more stories.
In our nearly 54 years of marriage, my wife has NEVER slept wearing her bra!
Ugh. Either you're not a native English speaker, or you're a moron. The writing is horrible. Don't write more until you are fluent in English. Being a native English speaker doesn't mean you're fluent in English either.
The true love of son is wonderful. Watching Rom-Com with Mom has led to more in the right way. Starts as little tease, seeing Mom's beautiful tits is an experience like no other.
It's amazing that mother nor son even discuss getting pregnant. It could be the mother knows she can't have any more children, but the son doesn't know that and probably doesn't even care. He just wants that sopping wet pussy.
And this so-called loving couple didn't even mention anything about dad in the picture. I'm all in for love and romance and hot streaming sex and maybe even making a baby between this couple but let's talk about all those things that may hinder they future as a couple.
It was obviously written by someone from India that's trying to sound American. It just ruins the story for me. In my head all I can hear is the words sounding like someone from India?
Me and my mom? It's my mom and I. I can tell you're not a native English speaker. Good plot though.