All Comments on 'My Mother in Law Usha'

by dreamsr4ever

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
A little

Story line is good but needs to fire and passion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
More

Get into it more. Make this a series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Well,

The storyline is good and you have talent in telling story, but your command of the language is so poor that it fails to deliver the stuffs that you want to present.

EmmSeaEmmSeaover 16 years ago
Ugly!!

I read the first two paras. Poorly written and in the wrong category (should be in NonConsent/Reluctance), it was rape.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Good

Good. Excellent story line. Need editing. Watching for next episode.

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