All Comments on 'My Mother in Law's Rebirth'

Dr beulahthebrit; Nice start to the story, one hopes that there will be several follow-up chapters, the rest of the week, Tina's experiences on herb week away, then the potential relationship between them all when she returns home. 4 stars, good effort.

Needs another chapter. Get the mil pregnant and a threesome with the wife who also needs to get knocked up

Great! Keep going.

Was this planned between Lisa and Tina?

If so good for him and I can see Tina coming back and them having a hot

threesome?

Interesting possibilities.

5 stars.

Stradivarius? Love that word choice. Slow build playing the devoted hubby. I could see Lisa through your descriptive prose. Yep, prose as it was poetry fescribing a MILF.

Well written! I enjoy the Mother in laws persistance ad the details of her outfits.///Will there be more coming?

Looking forward to part two!

you have to finish it now

Great descriptive writing no matter what the subject is. Excellent word choices, scene setting and character defining. I been with my wife 33 years and known her for almost 37. She is beautiful and the best person I know but her mother, my mother-in-law, I have been attracted to from Day 1 as well. She is gorgeous with a nice, light Caribbean accent and a great body, even as she approaches 80. I've had too many naughty thoughts about my MIL for many years.

Great little story thanks for your work.

Needs another chapter!

You have to continue this story

Very well written and paced just right. Excellent. Need more.

Great job and thank you for an excellent writing. In the next chapter Tina cheated with her wicked boss and Lisa consoles and comforts her son in law while trying to keep them both together!

Excellent story. Hope there's a part 2coming

How is there not a part 2 to this