All Comments on 'My Mother, My Lover Ch. 05'

What, this story went in a completely different direction than what I expected. Too much time went into the story about Dee Dee. More about the mom and Jesse. What ever happened to the vacation that was mentioned in the previous chapter?

New characters, big plot developments, sidetracked plans; I almost wonder if any of it was planned by you or if you just had a dream and said this is the new path I am following. HUGE chapter in a little space.

the dee dee is too much take part but i hope carole dee dee and son will have happy family with carrole and dee dee bore him son together

With bringing in two other women into the family it may have clouded the sexual affair between Jessie and Carole.

Although the thought of Dee-Dee becoming pregnant with Jessie''s baby does bring another aspect to the group.

Perhaps Jessie could get both Charlie and Dee-Dee pregnant?

Is there any way for Carole to have Jessie's baby, perhaps a misdiagnosis of her ability to conceive?

What ever happens, it has been a good read, and thanks for the chapter.

have enjoyed the story hope it continues past next chapter so many paths to take.

What a wonderful story. I read every word, smiling, laughing, masterbating, enjoying all ths situations as they developed. But being selfish, I want more of their adventures. Will you write some more?

introduce carol to DP

I love your stories, but in this one it would of been hot for dee dee to want him to be a true father.

This an excellent series. You have a good fertile imagination.😉

This whole series is adorable. Lovely characters, funny, kind, expressive and an engaging storyline going beyond erotica

Well developed story with plot and subplots seamlessly merged. Author continues to use gutter slang only were story circumstances require/logically demands its use. 5 star series.