All Comments on 'My Mother, My Lover Ch. 06'

Great story and series. Kind of sad way to end it with both Carole and Charlie dying. Hope you continue writing. Once again, great story.

Very sweet and loving, but extremely erotic.

A well written and edited series, that focused on love between two people more than just sex.

Although the sex was very descriptive and exciting to read, the love between mother and son was what made the story exceptional.

Thanks for the good read.

thank you ;)

The last comment said it best, Thanks. Glad that you concentrated on the relationship between Jesse and Carole in this chapter. Sad to have it end, but as they say it, all god things must come to an end.

I have enjoyed your series - Thanks.

The ending and "future" was thankfully enjoyed - Okay I like happy endings.

Enjoyed this series. Good to see that Jesse and Carol as well as Dee-Dee and Charlie had happy lives. Still, did you have to make it a somewhat sad ending with Carol and Charlie die in tragic ways? None the less, a great series.

Loved this story... But I was a little disappointed with the ending :-( AS they say ,who ever they are, so ends the story... Thank you bumble...

A nice and fitting end to the story. Looking forward to the rest of your stories

From the beginning to the end. LOVED IT

I have been at my computer the whole afternoon reading this incredibly lovely and moving story. I have been an avid Literotica reader for several years, but I must say that this is the first time I have left a comment on any story. This was wonderful and I must say I hope you continue to write often. It obviously comes from the heart.

Thank you for a really beautiful mother/son love story.

simply one of the best stories ive read on lit in the last 4 years and its the third time ive read it i still get teary eyed in the last chapter just a perfect story and hope you write alot more cant wait

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Great story very sad the mother have to die please keep writing great storys like this one with mother & son these are my favorite ones to read

am a hopeless romantic ! This last chapter in the series was your best by far , It had sizzling sex along with so much love and the bit of romantic tragedy at the end !

Bella

A great story all the way through! Thank you!

This is your best one. Thank you.😂😂

>>>>and Jesse nursed her through the worst times before she died in his arms, telling each other one last time how much they had always loved each other.<<<

Those Lines broke my heart, i read it over and over (about 100 times literally) but they doesn't seems to be changing....why beautiful carole has to die.....

the explanation used was beautiful as well as sexy at the same time

Although full story was that fantastic, i signed up especially to show my appreciation for this story...

I tripped on this story and read all chapters in one evening. I was enthralled from beginning to end. If ever this story were ever to become a movie I would be first in line. Look forward to reading more of your work.

Ok, kind of soppy, but after the masterwork the first five chapters turned out to be, I had to give this one five stars too.

I absolutely loved this story even though I was hoping that Carol would have her tunes untied and her and her son would have had a kid or 2 together but other than that bravo 👏 standing ovation 👏 👏 👏 👏

A soppy end? Maybe. An excellent and well written story? Definately.

Congradulations on a well written, logically developed story. 5 stars.

Beautiful series. Very sweet chapters, and quite a satisfying ending for me. Jesse and Carol had a great thirty-something years in their marriage and they were happy, so I an happy as well. Thank you, author.