All Comments on 'My Mother the Gangbang Queen Ch. 01'

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JadestoyJadestoyalmost 7 years ago
Reserving judgment

Wait to read more

lantern04lantern04almost 7 years ago
Very good.

I look forward to the sequel.

nicho1855nicho1855almost 7 years ago
Good story line.

It was great to see Mark show some guts, and not willingly shove his cock in her sloppy cum filled count. It would be good to see his mom and "ex friends" all contract a raging dose of some form of STD from their activities. That would be the ultimate payback for humiliating him the way they did.

amachiamachialmost 7 years ago
Awesome!

So there is a scene in which a son is tied up, forced to watch his friends gangbang his slut mom and then gets raped by his mother, while one of his friends fucks her ass. Man, that is one of the wildest things I've read on this site and it's great!

Thank you for this crazy good story!

soul71soul71almost 7 years agoAuthor
thanks

Thank you all who enjoyed this story, and you should know part two is already with my editor.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Kinda

Bad

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Hope for Next chapter

I hope in the sequel the son doesn't end up giving in to his mother hopefully it's the other way around sort of like "he's the ultimate conquest " and ruins her for the others

soul71soul71almost 7 years agoAuthor

Lol so not going to give spoilers, but I think you'll enjoy what's in the next one as soon as I get it back from my editor.

Bluebomber5Bluebomber5almost 7 years ago
It felt very confused an uneven.

I had serious trouble following the scenes in his one. You really need to indicate more clearly when one scene ends and another begins. The sex scene with beverly was on of the worst offenders since were suddenly thrown from her finally sliding down his cock, to suddenly him being dropped off back at home. It was extremely confusing a jarring.

soul71soul71almost 7 years agoAuthor

Well, sorry you feel that way then it's best you don't read the second one, and find another story more to your speed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Release date

When can we hope to see the next part to the story is it any time within the next few days

soul71soul71almost 7 years agoAuthor

Yes, hopefully I'll get it back from the editor here in the next few days he's already halfway through it. Then I have to go through it then I'll submit it so hopefully, it be out within the next week or so.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Interesting story

Very interesting story so far can't wait to find out if the son gets the last laugh or if it's the mother personally I want the son to come out on top cause it's kinda weird that the other guys (David) was freaked that he slept with their mothers when all his friends have betrayed him plus the ending to this chapter is strange that they would leave town probably to go become pornstars

soul71soul71almost 7 years agoAuthor
The Return of the Ganbang Queen

Well, I just submitted the second part, so it should be out here in a few days.

MyDirtySecrethobbyMyDirtySecrethobbyalmost 7 years ago
Can't wait

I'm excited to see what happens next hopefully it will just as good if not better then all your other stories

calibammacalibammaover 6 years ago
Never share mom

Although I will read them I actually despise seeing mom giving her sex to her son’s friends a will never give more than 2 ⭐️

jneric2691jneric2691over 5 years ago
If you read the story carefully

Right at the beginning the mother is not doing this to hurt the son. Her cheating husband was divorcing her drove her to get back at him and in doing so used her sons friends. She loves her son and is not trying to involve the son. Dad on the other hand has no compunction in using the son to get back at his wife and throws him in hard by showing him the video of his mother and friends, this turns him against mom, driving an already crazy mom over the edge to rape her son. Sometimes the shock value of the opening scene overshadows the detail point right at the beginning.

soul71soul71over 5 years agoAuthor

Man, jneric that's kind of deep, didn't even think about it when I wrote it.

soul71soul71about 5 years agoAuthor

For those who don't know, the return of the gangbang queen is chapter two to this tale. Lit just didn't pair the two up. Why. Your guess is as good as mine.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Hope you got the other moms pregnant too just to tell the other guys you knocked up their moms.how do you know mom might have gotten pregnant more than once and aborted un wanted pregnancy

bigcowboy36bigcowboy36about 4 years ago
needs a sequel

great story but it needs a paret two

darthnader19darthnader19almost 4 years ago
please continue

you left it at such a cliffhanger... we must know what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
kudos!

great story I love all your stories ! Cant wait untill you release a part 2!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
???

Is there going to be more?

lovedefactolovedefactoover 2 years ago

Where's the next chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Yet again you promised another chapter and failed

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

There is another chapter but its under a different name look under return of the gang bang queen

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Wow hotttt! Is this inspired by a true story πŸ˜€

oksideshow859419oksideshow8594193 months ago

Always a good read thanks

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