All Comments on 'My Mother the Stripper'

You need to finish this. I need closure!!

I'd like to see it continue

Very well written and a nice love story of sorts. I do hope there is a continuation, but how will he find her? We all know GPS won't track her down thru a Box number.

All I can say is, definitely continue the story.

Definitely want to read more

It was a good story and it deserves a good finish and not left hanging like you did. Difficult to turn it into a mon/son love story at this point but lots of folks mon/son lust just as much.

Have to know where this goes.

It felt a bit rush but I'd like to see where it goes!

GREAT STORY...MORE!!!

I really hope you post a part 2. The ending was good but it was left open for more to the story. This was a good set up please continue

Was a great story... There should definitely be further chapters?!!!

Need the next chapter

Needs a chapter 2!!!! Keep it going!

5* love a little mommy/son action.

Great start please ad d more chapters!!!!!!

please write more of this stroy

Give us more

Loved the story, Please continue................

Continue for sure! I SMELL ROMANCE

Do go on...

GREAT story. Please write more!!!!!

Most definitely write a part 2 or 3 and keep going out is an amazing storyline

Definitely needs to continue.

Great story and very well written. Hope to see many future chapters for this one. 5 stars

Great start, very interested to see where this goes. Can’t wait for Part 2

awaiting for second part, congratulations

Definitely keep this one going!

This really needs a couple more chapters. Great start

Wow more please

Oh yeah; you need to continue this story. This stew is just starting to simmer!

This is one of the better stories that I've read on here. It's definitely one that you should keep writing! It's one hell of a plot line and most definitely movie material!

Please continue the story.

***Good Read nice storyline. Thanks for sharing.

Even though getting involved with a stripper is as good for you as drinking copier fluid, a part two for this story would be good.

Please continue on the part 2, good story so far

Excellent . Lots of room for continuation, Please continue..PG

Let him find her

good build up continue please many places to go

roxy could get word another dancer got hooks into him

he hears from a trucker where she is

diner is robbed Jeremy is hurt Roxy hears about it on news

plenty of places to go look forward to where ever you take it

Wow... continue please!

Great premise and well written besides. I am just getting tired of inarticulate young men. I think too many writers here resort to speechlessness to avoid writing a dialog. I believe it is an overused trope. I am curious, however, to see what you come up with if you pursue this story line, so I hope you continue.

I liked the premise and stress brought about, continue,please. I would love to see where you take this!

Wow. This is going to be a hell of a story.. keep writing

That was pretty damn hot, I really thought he was going to tell her who he was. I certainly was expecting her to fuck him so quickly, no wonder she's so popular.

Hell yes, use the 10k to track her down, and at least tell her you love her.

by all means, continue the story! they both have unfinished business.

Still waiting for Chapter II

The Title says it all.... Thanks!!

This was a good start with so many possibilities. I thoroughly enjoyed the character development....4stars until I can see where this goes...nice!

Love the plot. Just write the way you want

Nice story that takes a very piquant twist! But it's still entertaining!

Need part 2! (At least)

Knew where it was going but still a great read.