All Comments on 'My Mother, the Thief'

All mothers and sons should experience such beautiful uninhibited love.

Alwaystaboo

best story ever , hope you will do more , great.

enjoyed it a lot, well written, hope you make them longer, a bit too short, and certainly hope there is ch. 2

Just get the book back to Greg. It was a very good read ,more like this one PLEASE

Well that was a differnet story all together...loved it...

The pacing is AWFUL. If you just chilled out a bit and let the pacing create drama instead of more exposition dumps this story would be something other than mediocre. Flush out the motivations of your characters, why does he want to blackmail his mother? You show her being great to him, but he's still an asshole.

Slow it down and more detail. Didn't mind the blackmail but felt bad for the friend. ***

Honestly I pictured the son discovering she didn't steal it but instead rocked the kids world for the book: oral and sex but saved the ass for her son.

The sex is great, but that's one problem I had with the story. That's easily fixed with him slipping the book back and Greg's and Greg later telling him he must have misplaced it.

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While I like the part of her having him move into her bed, even with him keeping his stuff in his room, with a staff the size you indicate that could be a problem. At some point someone is going to have to wake her or him up early and discover the two. I guess an out would be to seduce the staff.

More tales as to Mommy bringing others into his Harem. Bored Housewives obnoxious Daughters. To name a Few. and Send the Book back to Greg Anonymously.

Nice premise. Good build-up. Spent a bit too much time eating pussy. Need more fucking. This story seemed to ending should have been the middle. Okay he was going to fuck her butt. No butt fucking. This story could very easily have several installments.

You need to make the story longer. I was just really getting into it and it was over.

Oh great a rich clepto and a rapist, they were made for each other...