All Comments on 'My Motherly Duties Ch. 01'

All mothers should care about the academic success of their children.

This was absolutely incredible!!!!

A very nice story. Nice to see a mother so dedicated to her children's education. Please continue. Maybe later she can help some nieces and nephews

For your first story, I'm a follower! All mothers need to make sure their sons are ready for school!

Good story, keep writing. Will be looking for chapter 2.

I gave this 5 stars which is unusual for a "first" story author.

You write like an experienced writer - scene descriptions were vivid.

This entry was complete and it left the opening for future chapters as well. Will make a note of your name and watch for Chapter Two.

I look forward to seeing how this progress.

Family loving is lasting loving,,and this is wonderful writing,,can't wait for the next episode.

Please continue with Chapter 2!

Thanks for all the Support on this Story!

However, it couldn't have been done without the help of HeyAll for editing this story!

Go check him out:

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Just one little advice

Don' t go so fast, give time for the build up

Tease us

Please continue your great story.

Good start to, we all hope, is many chapters and stories. Read some of mine if you get a chance, kingswede.

Great story with very detailed descriptions. Mothers want the best for their sons and sometimes have to be unconventional in performing actions needed. .

No explanation of how they got there and she tastes her pussy after doing all that to his cock. Please not surprised HEYALL edited it for it sucked!

Please continue with more chapters and include other family members and servants also.

Naughty start. Looking forward to more.

This is a great start to a good series for you. Just need a little more background for your characters. Can't wait until the next chapter.

I love hot kitchen sex stories. Something as hot as a stove, finally!

This is too good. Your language makes it sound exciting. Do write more.

I dont normally comment but this is really, genuinely good. 10/10 :)

Can't wait for Mom to introduce Daughter to her Scheme. It would seem she plans on getting her Daughter pregnant. then telling her the Father.

Super hot almost shot my load keep writing.

Most family stories fall flat. not this one.

Holy Mackerel...! This was nothing short of Fabulous for your first story and I cannot wait for more. I would have loved it if my Mother took care of me as well as she did. Cumming on Moms pretty face and in her messy hair has always been my biggest fantasies. Right next to creaming on her pretty painted toes.

Great story

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