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Click here"Ah my lovely babies," Mother cooed, stroking our hair, kissing our cheeks and lips. "Mommy does love you so!" We collapsed into my mother's wet warmth, our moist skins pressed against each other, our breathing heavy. Liam and I avoided meeting eyes, but we stayed there, at peace in our mother's madness, letting her stroke and whisper, bringing us along with her into her unique little world.
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Good start to story. Nice, easy pace, not too fast or too slow. Enjoyed the almost diary-like viewpoint. Gave the story a more personal feel. 4⭐
Very nicely written. I liked the pace and the way that the story and characters developed.
What a wonderfully erotic story! I thought you set the stage beautifully and then gave us an incredible description of family love being realized. Bravo! Looking forward to more motherly madness!
Well written, intriguing characters, and oh so sexy... I was a pool of melted person by the conclusion. Please don't keep us hanging for the next installment!
I hope presages much more from you. I especially liked, what I would call, your use of a 'personal journal' style. Your masterful writing made the transition from innocence into Paradise stunningly memorable.
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Lovely story, beautifully crafted, the first I hope of many, please don't leave me hanging here part two? I do hope so. jack.