by WendyTrilby
Any mother who fucked her sons friend is a whore and has no respect for her son
You are an excellent writer. Vivid and lurid. Thanks for the head's up - not quite my kink (And I would have enjoyed a bit more nipple play - somehow, I think you'd be good at writing that.)
Enjoyed the story but would like a more indepth development of the psychology of Mrs. Weckenstein. As for Dom/sub relationship, she has violated the three primary rules of such a relationship. I would like to know about earlty family dynamics. What has she goy against "love", "emotional, sexual and sensual intimacy" and "passion". From this story, it appears that Mrs. Weckenstein wants to be a man. Because of the lack of development of the characters, story rated 4 stars.
Amazing writing. Erotica of the highest order and so sensually told. What an imagination. Please keep contributing
WOW! This is the best story that I've ever read. Please continue. Almost reminds me of my late mother...
Wow!
Excellent erotica!
You have me aroused….and Cumming!
And thinking of my mom and my friend’s mom…..
You are an exceptionally talented writer!
Thank you….
Well done, well written, very different. I like the femdom angle, Sex was vividly described and hot AF. I hate to sound like one of those "we need another chapter" types, but I'd be interested in the mother's back ground, see where some of this originated from. Usually someone needs to be 'broken' before they become the 'breaker' so to speak. I agree with another reader in the sense this fell over the line a bit in top/bottom relationship, but not overly so, and its a hard line to walk sometimes. This character has serious potential.
Ignore the NRT comments and all comments calling any female character a whore. Literotica has become infested with insecure men who can't separate fiction from their sad reality.
Good job, hope you revisit the category again.
Outstanding writing. A woman like this is a real predator. Now, I need to write a story about one. 😁 Five easy stars.
The author writes well descripted scenes. Iy made me want a married woman to do that to me. I ask myself, was this her veiled history or an interview based story of a friend. Either way every man who wanted a dominant mother/wife/cougar will read this and think “could I be Grant”. I had one woman tell me to use ice on her, maybe she wanted it inside her or my tongue cooled off for oral sex. I never followed up on the idea, I did love her though.
Quite an interesting premise. Like your vocabulary choices. You are doing good work, keep it up.
It was basically a good story. I'm not into the idea of giving oral sex to a woman who just peed and has another man's cum dripping from her. Also not into licking a penis clean that just came out of one's anus.
In addition, here's a quote from your story: "As the dildo moved across my prostrate,,...." The dildo would have moved across his PROSTATE gland. When a person lies down completely flat, they are lying PROSTRATE.
One of the most descriptive, female writers on Lit ….I’m definitely gonna be reading more Well done
Realistic writing, plausible and believable story. I enjoyed "My mother straddled my chest in a reverse cowgirl stance so her magnificent ass was on my chest and in my face. My view was her slender back, her pale anus, her manicured perineum, and black-haired pussy. Her soaked snatch left a trail of her wetness on my skin as she scooched her ass toward my face."
I hate shaved pussy, when its noting but razor burn, chaffed skin, pimples, ingrown hairs, stubble growing out of pimples, and next week boils. You did an excellent job of avoiding that stuff by leaving mom age appropriate and hairy. Moms in stories like this should be hairy.
LOVE she has a full ebony muffin...
...ice cube in ass a new kink to me...
no surprise a cougar MILF should want younger cock-quick recharge time...
Impressive story line and well written! Hot as all get out! Would love to see a part 2!
A masterpiece! Perhaps the most erotic story I have ever read! The original plot was refreshing and exciting. The workup was perfectly timed and flawlessly executed. Nice to see a son with morals struggling with what was unfolding and was unstoppable. Lastly the cream pie, rimming and pegging were twists that I kept saying to myself, "No, it couldn't be headed that way right up to the surprise pegging of her own son! I would love to see a chapter 2. Please keep writing.