by TMONY1
Question: out side of porn who talks like that? Other than the bad sex talk, it wasn't too bad a story
What happened to Lyn? Is she still at the airport 2 days later. Story reads that you hooked up with Jenny and forgot about Lyn.
Titled "My Naughty Little Nieces" but he only fucks one. Obviously, this is only Chapter 1. The problem is that if that is true, there should have been a chapter number in the title to indicate to people it's not a complete story BEFORE reading the story.
Who the hell calls everybody baby, especially 18 years old girls calling their 35 year old uncle baby. Ruins the story
what is with the "Oh baby" crap. I see someone else did not like it either.
I liked the story, but the other commenters are right about the "Oh baby" business. I dropped it from 5 stars to 4 because of it.
Incest is an aspect of several of my stories. As much as I can, given that I am writing porn fantasies, I try to make the move into Incest feel realistic. I just feel that this story moved to quickly across the line between acknowledging physical attraction and incest.
Other than that, I enjoyed this.
Thanks for sharing your stories with us.
Bravo, Clay aurait pu se servir de sa tête par ses cheveux blonds comme une poupée de chiffon pour la baiser sur sa bite.
Jenny a mérite ceci... Excellent merci
The going to hell part your probably right.
Purgatory was a option if you had written about your nieces friends. Equally sexy.