All Comments on 'My Neighbor's Shenanigans'
by storm_usmc
- 143 Comments (Page 2)
SC_223almost 7 years agoReally good read. Love your writing style and enjoyed every word. Keep up the good work.
Axelottoalmost 7 years agoYou had me dripping wet and I'm a guy!
Pushed a lot of buttons... Thank you!
Anonymousabout 7 years agoYou had me sopping wet and dripping on my mattress. I'd love to be Sarah or David, fuck, Sarah especially. I was on the edge of orgasm the whole time I read this (and broke out the old vibe). Great work! Sequal??
QSQuinnabout 7 years agoReally great. I don't often read a story this long without skimming a bit, but you had me hooked. Great work
Anonymousabout 7 years agoAwesome story!!!! Great want to read more !!!!
Anonymousabout 7 years agoI wiish I was THERE! Especially liked the parts where she is sleeping and gets "waked up". For sure a fantasy of mine! I hope that has happened to you. Lots.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoGreat build up of tension, and great ending.
Looking forward to the sequel ?
Anonymousover 7 years agoSounds like a nice evening. I would put all 3 fine asses on the couch and worked the line.
ProfDavrosover 7 years agoLove this building fantasy. Would enjoy much more, your writing is expressive and novel, characters cheeky and believable. I look forward to more.
Anonymousover 7 years agoa very hot story!
How could things go on?
Sarah will sit on bed, his head between her leg for her first orgasm. The second one with him lying on bed and riding his face.
In my miind is a little education for Joseph. His affair should take things in her hands, having him bound to bed and giving lections in licking. Maybe all others from party join them, so he can taste different women. And finally for revange his wife gets fucked in front of him by Sarahs friend and later his wife mounts his lips to clean her
Anonymousover 7 years agoDitto the thanks to your editor. Best crafted I've read here. And a great story as well.
Anonymousover 7 years agoNeed more to many loose ends.... Need a they lived happily ever after.... More...
Anonymousover 7 years agoDefinitely needs a second chapter. The whole story seems to lead up to Jason and Sarah finally spending a night of bliss together, but when that finally comes to be, the story just ends. Excellent story, though. Hope this helps. Semper Fidelis.
Anonymousover 7 years agoLoved it, definitely need a chapter two (and three). Love the writing style.
Was it just me or did his name change from Jason to David?
JJMemaw0623over 7 years agoAww, you have to finish the story! There has to be MORE! Keep writing!!
johnpauljover 7 years agoEvery guys fantasy! Wouldn't it be nice if people would just enjoy life like that...
Anonymousover 7 years agoI don't think Gabby was the only one who came thrice!
I did too! I came and came so hard! Thank you thank you
Anonymousover 7 years agoWow, that was a good story. So good that this is the first time I'm even bothering to comment on here. I came 3 times reading this.
Sam37over 7 years agoGabriella or Gabrielle, not Gabriel. I would use the former because you described her as Latina. I was confused about the person at first, and thought you were describing a homosexual couple until "she began to remove her bikini".
Otherwise this was a great tale well told.
Anonymousover 7 years agoNormally, I like the shorter stories. This one was so damn good, I couldn't stop reading. I hope you continue the story line on this couple. Truly marvelous.
Anonymousover 7 years agoGreat story. I know it has only been out a few days but I'm already wishing there was a part two out for this story.
Definitely keep up the great writing.
Anonymousover 7 years agoWow this is the best I have seen in a long time. Excellent and writing flows well. I am going to be waiting for more adventures with the two neighbors.
DDH3269over 7 years agoI started this story and could not stop reading. It moved along well and had enough intrigue that was wondering what was around the next corner. The women were well-described and fit perfectly into their roles. Thank you.
MajorRewriteover 7 years agoGabriella is a woman's name that can be shortened to Gabby.
Anonymousover 7 years agoOne of the most erotic and sensuous seduction stories I have ever read. Will there be more from Jason, Sarah and her friends?
