All Comments on 'My Neighbor's Shenanigans'

Exceptional writing, certainly one of the better eroticas I've read. It makes the characters feel real, engaging, and not just objects. Very well done. Certainly looking foreword to the next chapter!

That was a story? --(Lost in fantasy world)--Thanks

I enjoyed it. Good story line.

More. NOW!

More please!

I’ve been reading for years but this had to be my all time favorite. From the well build and still very sexy suspense, the believable story arcs, the sexiest sex and the subtile, to the somehow sexy checking for consent: all just amazing!

Upon further review, my second reading, I've upgrade the story to 5 stars.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

I hope you e revisited this sordid tale

Great story. Would love a follow up.

Excellent story. A follow up on their escapades would be cool

Excellent. Thank you

Very well written. Erotic but not crass, believable characters, just enough back story and build-up. Well done!

Way to go

fun little sex romp,,liked it, everybody had a good time,,feel good story..

Sexy as hell.

Great story!

Very well written, loved it!

I'm on edge waiting for part 2 We need to hear about the night with Sarah. Loved it!!!

Great story. I was edging the whole time. I look forward to more.

Exceptionally good, thoroughly enjoyed it, must be more to come surely.

Major erotica. Very sensual and steamy. Among the most artistic I have read. Excellent.

An excellent, sensitive, restrained, imaginative writing and description but fully described the happs. Loved the way Sarah teased him him in a long welcome, the presents and the assurance he would have his time to enjoy her. The ‘doing it in the pool’ was excellently written keeping me on the verge all the time and the way the other two girls gently joined you very well described.

I shall be reading more of your stories. I hope you will be writing more.

an absolute scorcher! 🔥🔥🔥

I really enjoyed this story! It had a lifelike flow. Most stories like this have a pause, like the author did not know where to go next, not this one!

OMG. I've read a lot of Literotica (and written a bunch too), but this one simply nailed me. I was hard the entire time. Great writing, outstanding dialogue, believable progression of events. Sarah is a phenomenal character. I hope you have used her again, because I plan to read all of your stories.

Love the writing. Love the care of each for the others. Love the fucking - I'm a group person.

Really great work!! The build up. The sexiness. I was wet the whole time!

Loved the story, it reminded me of my neighbors a little. I started swimming nude in my pool at night and noticed my neighbor and his wife started taking great interest in watching my nude. After that, I started sunbathing nude so they could have a better view of my breasts and bush. After a week or so of watching me, they decided to give me a house warming with a few bottles of wine. Before long, his cock was buried in my pussy and his wife was watching with interest. After he would cum, she would immediately go down on me and lick out his cum. One time he fucked my tits and came all over my face and tits and she immediately set to work licking up his cum off my face and tits. Sometimes she sits on my face while he fucks me. This threesome relationship is amazing and they have become the best neighbor I have ever had. For what it is worth, the writers style gets me incredibly wet while I read it and I can't stop fingering myself as I read. Great story!

Incredibly sexy, I fingered myself throughout the entire story.

Thanks for a really fun fantasy, a quick read! Not exactly to my taste, but really fun. This is my take, obviously, and I hope the feedback is helpful.

David seems clearly the focus, the male protagonist who gets to fuck all the women and has insight, with Sarah the female dominant who "orchestrates things" but shares little of her experiences. She needs fleshing out, not just the stunt cocks and pussies she's apparently used to.

Sarah's experiences are almost absent, certainly lacking in depth, and I would like to hear more about what things are like FOR HER. I'd love to hear about a second MMF night, for example, with details such as what it's like to be double-poled, what each of their cum tastes like, etc., while e.g. David creates an FFM with Shayna and Gabby.

I am especially taken with the story of Shayna, who only recently started fucking women, and only because Sarah "made her" put out. I would like to hear more about her, the way she feels and fucks, who and how much and what it's like, not just Sarah and Gabby. Though all of them should be fucking frequently, of course!

David seems like he has recently been kind of going through a "drought" of sorts, and I would love to have him recruit another playmate (independently of Sarah?), maybe someone who often shares his bed and his other partners.

Shayna could perhaps also recruit someone for more Shenanigans! I'd love to hear about her and the new female friend sexing David on his patio, spying on Gabby and Sarah fucking down by the pool. In my fantasy, they're soon inspired, then Sarah texts David to come and help fuck Gabby!

Gabby is somewhat of a mystery, and I think she's ripe to become a totally awesome sex-bomb! Obviously, she's going to crave cock, and lots of it, but she needs to learn how to munch a rug, too, so she's part of the solution as well as having her needs met.

Clearly, the group needs another cock to keep all the women happy! David can build a strong friendship with someone who loves pussy like he does, or learns to, but isn't connected enough yet. "A friend in need is a friend indeed," as it were, perhaps someone new to town.

All in all, a "delightful romp," so to speak. Thanks again!

Hell I love it !! Nice one.

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Love the story and so well played. Would there be a continuation with their adventures?

🙂 hehehhehehehehhe

Nice, well set up Bro. You make the Corps proud. Now keep it up, expand the interaction with the camera, the lights, the flerting and the love between the four. Have the girl kick the ass hole boyfriend out. Introduce your studs military friends to the three girls, have everyone go camping for a week where they switch and compare notes at the evening campfire. have fun with them up untill they are all knocked up and each Marine kneels to perpose to each girl. Have fun at the reception, then after the three couples exchange voews - let the fireworks begine again. Semper Fi Devel Dog !

Doc. Meade FMF 8404

Excellent - I really want to hear more of these characters! I especially liked the brazen action that both main characters take to forward their agendas. Would love to get more details, such as you provided more recently in Sibling Code. And Shayna definitely deserves to have serial multiple orgasms from different men and women licking her.

There, I felt even more like I could visualize the characters "directly" rather than by having read of them. Maybe those storylines could be merged to some extent? Marissa Espinosa could perhaps be a friend or cousin of Gabriella (since they're both Latina,) who invites her to another cookout, and then extolls the magnificence of David's tongue work on her, despite Marissa having become a paid concubine in the process of her adventures in that story. Maybe 'Concubine Heaven' is a destination for both Latinas, where they are paid for "hostess duties" at certain parties!

I know it's work, and you're not paid for it, but we've been waiting for years for more Shenanigans! More Sibling Code, too! Don't forget Trish, she's got a lot of potential, maybe to be tied up blindfolded, perhaps left as a gift to David? Or for all three of the women he fucked in that story and him?

More please.

Loved the story, would be a great story to have more chapters

MORE MORE MORE

An excellent, exciting read, great development, from voyeur of an exhibitionist to active participant. Sarah wants her own fun, but is generous towards Gabby making sure she has everything she's been missing.

Fun read, I am ready for a pool party like that!

Thanks for writing this story! It was well written, character development and plausible.

I love the characters, but I wish there was more about the experience of actually fucking Sarah and Shayna, and more description of their bodies. I was really hoping for more scenes of them fucking each other, too. Maybe the next day when Sarah is putting out all day long, she could be getting throat-fucked with her head hanging over the edge of the bed, and Shayna wakes up and comes in and starts eating Sarah out.

Anyway, it's pretty hot - thanks!

Good fun and not a lot of character depth

Please continue the series; really enjoyed many of yours, but love these! We have not had a really personal description of what it's like to fuck Sarah, nor has she been involved in bondage much. I'd love to see her get a surprise one night when Shayna sleeps over, and then ties Sarah up, blindfolds her, and while riding her face David comes over and fucks them both.

Appreciative reader! I love the slow build where are you introduce characters well explaining their desires. I felt the tension, excitement and release well I followed along imagining to be each character.

Such an enjoyable as well as Long masturbation session. Nicely done my friend.

Very well written and edited. Development and story pace were both right on. My minds eye was very busy. You could almost smell the chlorine and sex in the air. There MUST be a continued story.

The character development is fabulous.. Its a perfect amount of true sensualism and not just sex.. I wish this continues.. Favourite yet.. Wowww

it's crazy how awesome this was to read. I actually just wanna know what happens next beyond my own pleasure. I know we're all here for the lust, but I hope Sarah and David can find something romantic with one another! :)

Well written, great story line, and something that every hot blooded person would like to have happen to them.....REALLY ENJOYED THE STORY.

Lease continue, exceptional character development, deserves to be continued.

Will rank among the best on Literotica. Sadly max five stars are permitted !!!

Not only was this story deliciously written, I loved how respectful it was to women in general and the characters specifically. Rarely do you read a story with this much tension when all the players involved are completely consensual, but this made me realize just what I've been missing in my erotica my entire life. Truly, game-changing literature.

Title says it all. Enjoyed and believed in the story start to finish. covered many aspects .Well done !

Story is greatly written-ish. Characters well described and believable, story-line progresses beautifully.

One thing though: what's with the changing of tense, sometimes even within the same paragraph. Decide whether the story is told in present tense, or in past tense - then STICK TO IT.

This gives words like copy-paste a need to evolve - copy-paste-edit...

Because you stopped waiting for more about these two possibly where you left off. Very well done!!

Very well written and entertaining!

Loved the story! Well written! I’ll be looking for more of your work!

Please write more! Loved every paragraph

Great story. Would love to see a sequel to this one.

The title of my comment pretty much sums it up. You set the tone for David's approach right at the beginning, without any childish sentiment. A very mature, interesting, erotic and (frankly) well written short story. I look forward to reading your others as well. Thank you...this story took a lot of effort, and it shows.

One of the longer stories I enjoyed. I came halfway through, came back later for the rest and came again. Tastefully done!

Very erotic... nice build to an amazing climax...

You did a good job here. You addressed some interesting issues, like cheating, guilt, and promiscuity, in a way that was obviously erotic, but without being smutty and crude. Your protagonist David, while knowingly engaged in a harem situation, still gave attention to each of the participants, showing that he still had a conscience, and wasn't just trying to take advantage of them. I'm impressed.

First time poster and new user of this site. Amazing! Love your style.

Absolutely fantastic!! Thank you!

Loved it!

Great writing. Great story!

Please give us more of the story of Sarah and David!

Damn, that's one helluva story.

WOW X soooooooooo good x so wanted this to hppen to me and my G/F xxx so easy to read more more more please

Thanks for your service! I hope you enjoyed writing this as much as I enjoyed reading it.

We've been waiting for 2 years for the next round of shenanigans to begin! Please tell us you will have them soon.

Absolutely glorious! One of the best stories ever!

Best story ever!

The build up, the excitement, the fun, the feelings, everything!! Yes, that was really something! Thank you!!

I am in agreement with the rest of the commenters - there needs to be at least a "My Neighbor's Shenanigans, Part 2" - you gave us all the shenanigans in great detail, but ended before the final consummation of Sarah and David - at least the less exhibitionistic kind - it could end after they both collapse from exhaustion or could begin a new chapter when the forgotten girls wake them up in the morning - good story tho - keep up the good work

First off I’ve never commented on anyone’s story but I just could not go without giving a shout out on this story. I really hope that this will become a series of stories or at least have a sequel. This story was fantastic, GREAT job!

The story was really great.

The build-up to David and Sarah meeting was nice and the interaction between them and the others was also great.

Any chance of seeing the story continued and seeing what will happen between David and Sarah next and to see how their relationship will develop? And to also see what will happen with Gabrielle and Shayna?

Good luck and happy writing.

Excellent build-up and slow release. Great job. Thx.

Great story! Would be great to hear more...maybe from one of the other characters or a certain amount of time in the future. I enjoyed it! Great detail too.

Great job, thanks.

Great story want to hear more

Really loved reading this story. really well written and really well thought out. I do hope to see a continuance to this great story. even into a series would be great to see if possible if not maybe the same story but from the point of view of Sarah instead of David.

This is a really hot story, but the ending is abrupt. I would love to read a Part 2 that continues where this one leaves off. At the very least, the only sex we've had between Sarah and David was in the pool and it would be nice to read about their night. It would also be good to see where this goes with the others. Will this be a one-time thing or is it the beginning of a poly-amorous relationship where all four are lovers? Please write more about these characters!

Great story, I hope there's more to come!

Realized in the beginning that I already read this story. That didn't stop me from reading it again. Great story. Excellent detail and depth. I hope there are more adventures with these characters.

mmmmhmm that was beautiful. nice story and needs more. fuck sarah is one scorching hot babe

Excellent write about real and believable people, not just sex. Great job and thanks.

Clearly one of the best stories I have ever read here, and would read ten follow ups if you wrote them!!! Sarah is one hot little kitten!!

Best story I have ever read, here or anywhere. You are truly an artist.

Enjoyed reading it

about 100 more pages. Awesome stuff. Very hot. Loved it.

This is the best story I have read on here. It was erotic without being crass, incredibly arousing and wonderful to read. Your descriptions set every scene perfectly and you managed to captivate me from the first paragraph. So many stories on here are plotless, characterless devices for sharing sexual fantasies but this story really spoke of erotic longing and the desire to experiment. I loved it. Thank you.

Really loved this story! I hope you continue by filling in the details of what happened when they hit the bedroom.

and the story still works well. Excellent descriptions, easy to read, fun sexual arousal story and an excellent conclusion.

Wish I could give you a ten! Wonderful characters and great action!

This was a great story. WELL written, awesome visual, great content. I think it's time for chapter two. You wrote about the guy waking up tied to the bed with the neighbor standing over her. Write that story as an extension to this one. Please...

It's been a while since I've Edited anything. I'd like to Be your editor...

Wow, what a story! Great job keeping it real, erotic, and moving along. It never got tedious and I kept reading, ready for more. Love this!

Great build up and good writing, a couple of typos but that is being picky.

Thanks for the read

Great story with great detail. I enjoyed it from start to finish and I cannot wait to read your next story. You really got me hard!

dammit that was hot, great detail and content, had me excited from start to finish.

Brilliant Story

Wanked over this

This was damn well done. Characters are realistic and seem like you could communicate with them

Rocked it. You obviously have a talent for communicating and connecting with people. Thanks a lot for the gift

that was so good I could smell them looked for some thing lick.

Really good read. Love your writing style and enjoyed every word. Keep up the good work.