All Comments on 'My New Career'

a chapter 2

Thank you More please

NorthPacific

Loved it.

What an absolutely delightful new career. You have left a lot of room to expand the story. Hopefully we'll hear more of Mary, and Diane and Karen as well. Vince is one lucky devil.

I hope this continues! Thank you!

I really enjoyed reading it. I seldom read stories more than two pages, but the pacing - not too fast or slow - kept me going to the end. Congratulations.

Great tale. Well written. I love how YOU held the names back, not "HI, I'm Vinnie AND THIS IS MY STORY."

If I have any reservations is too many pauses in love-making. I hope Vincent knows how to sensually undress a woman with his next two women. This seemed too clinical, but it was a learning experience, so hopefuly he grows.

it has a nice open ending so is there a ch.2 in the future?

As previously said, very nice and well written. An enjoyable read.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

Love gigolo stories. Past searches on Literotica miss ones found later. (Search system on Literotica not the best.) Happened upon Otazel, was scanning his submissions, and latched only onto this one first off. Yay!

Chapter 2 could be Diane, chapter 3 Karen... With each client giving him training and encouragement for his incipient career. He needs to learn to compliment and praise her attributes and actions. Also to express his pleasure. For those not as forward (demanding?) as Mary, how to find their wishes, and maybe for some how to take charge. How about a prospective client so hesitant she has to come with her friend, a current client, to investigate and then join in? In my opinion, Ozatel has the imagination and is such a great storywriter that he could produce a scintillating series.

I like Vince and can see him turning into an accomplished, affectionate, humble, likable, experienced lover who knows how to make women happy -- women of differing ages, body types, needs and situations.

Enjoyed this GREAT start.

With admiration,

Paul in Oklahoma

1/11/19 just came upon your stories and thought each were great. This is a new theme for me and I enjoyed it. Looking forward to future chapters .

As indicated by the accompanying dates on the Submissions page, this is the correct order:

My New Career

My New Career - Judith

My New Career - Diane

Unquestionably 5 stars

Paul in Oklahoma