All Comments on 'My New Career - Diane'

by Otazel

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swfb70swfb70about 5 years ago
I found it interesting

that they never kissed

I did however enjoy the story

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 5 years ago
Enjoyable

She was there for good sex, and seems she got it.

TSreaderTSreaderabout 5 years ago
A very yummy chapter!

Very well done, but no kissing... Thank you!

OtazelOtazelabout 5 years agoAuthor
Kissing

Thanks for your feedback, it all helps. I did think to have the pair kiss, but somehow it didn't seem appropriate to the dynamics of the couple. It was much more a business arrangment than anything else, and that's the way I've tried to treat it.. I hope you didn't mind too much.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
HOT!

Would love another chapter...

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