All Comments on 'My New Girl? Ch. 05'

You are writing a love story and it definitely reads like one. So much so that I keep forgetting that Jamie is a shemale, well medically anyway. And really that's what's it's all about. Not who we are on the outside but who we are on inside that matters. So please continue the story of the lives of "Mr. and Mrs. Williams"

Agreed..this story is damn good and needs to keep going. Keep at it man!

Was well written and an enjoyable read