by alexcarr
I hate to take up your comment space with this but I felt dreadfully annoyed at the previous comment. This story is about a first time and this is what defines the story not the fact that it is between gay men. Once you knew it was going to be a story of two men you could have easily stopped reading. There was no need to be rude.
Anyway, on to your story... I thought it was very interesting and I liked the plant imagery. I do not usually read stories about two men but this was a beautiful story of this young man's first time.
Thank you and I am so glad you liked my story.