All Comments on 'My New Partner Raquel'

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ChevMan69ChevMan69about 15 years ago
Awesome Story

Regardless of black or white, two people found what they were looking for and must have enjoyed. Good story which keeps the readers attention with excitement.

madengineer3madengineer3about 15 years ago
Very Nice!

This is a very nice story. The time frame in the story is reasonable for the action, as are the guy's thought patterns. This is a good read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Short, but still an arousing read

Very descriptive, but not much of a storyline. Seems like there could be more to learn about these two characters.

Johnny1MJohnny1Mover 12 years ago
My son's a police officer and

believe me, he would never have a beer and 4 shots of whiskey and then drive. Now I am sure some police officers are alcoholics and do drive drunk. But those that aren't are very conscious of what it could cost them. Like their job. You get in an accident, and police officer or not, you'll lose your license to drive if you were drunk. And if you drive a patrol car for a living, you might very well find yourself without a job.

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Not everyone will like every story. All I ask is for you to be kind in your evaluations. Be constructive, not nasty. Thank you