All Comments on 'My New Personal Assistant Ch. 04'

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Laura1234Laura1234over 1 year ago

Oh you stopped right there! I look forward to the next installment…

Reggie2xxReggie2xxover 1 year ago

I believe this is getting better are they both going to get what they want.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

OMFG!!! This just went way past entering dangerous territory. Right now, you're smack dab in the middle of it. So go cancel the second bed and tell Natasha to get out of yours. Then tell her that she can sleep on the sofa but only until she finds her own place to live. This was another great chapter, can't wait for #5. MLF

Oliver22Oliver22over 1 year ago

"What are you doing, Matt?". Good job ending the story with a sentence that makes it ambiguous about who is speaking.

DevonCowboyDevonCowboyover 1 year ago

Oliver sums it up perfectly

88girfriend88girfriendover 1 year ago

I have not been this into a short story in a long time. Well done. 👏

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