All Comments on 'My Newly Nudist Twin Sister Ch. 01'

I am looking forward to the next chapter!!

really like the character development. looking forward to chapter 2.

This is why I read Literotica. Great story. Hawaii should be fabulous, and very secretive.

I've read this before. Copied? New Acct?

Delightful story. You've show us a relationship between a believable sister and brother that is at once intimate and, at least in their own minds, innocent. I found this story very hot with plenty of titillation and without the ickiness that often keeps me away from this category. Well done.

Hope this is the same guy. Really talented writer!

I agree with the narrator: Ana's description of a blowjob is the best I've ever heard! Very fine writing in general. Your keen sense of detail is amazing.

Uninhibited and sensual, can ask for and give what she wants.

Perhaps it's a good story. I'm about to find out. However, the very first sentence leads me to wonder about the author's overall knowledge.

"My sister Amy and I are fraternal twins." says the guy.

Well gollllllyyyy. If they were born to the same mother at the same time that's all they could be. Identical twins are, as the name implies, identical - ergo both male or both female. Therefore: "My sister Amy and I are twins." is all that was needed.

I hope it gets better.

Thanks for the erotic 'reminder' of my and my sister's times gone by!

Very real descriptions, as if real life personal experiences had - thanks!

Great writing and story.

I loved this.very well done.

There is no fucking way you could write sibling incest any better than this. That part where Amy describes how she felt when swallowing David's cum … that was just perfection. Awesome story.

Jesus Christ it just kept getting better and better. The sunscreen. The shower. A fucking mini orgasm from swallowing. Mutual masturbation. Twins! It's like a greatest hits tour of my kinks!