All Comments on 'My Next Door Neighbor Allison'

Great 10/10. Well presented..Thank you

Loved this story! Dave should have a dusting of sexy chest hair -- something for Allison to be turned on about! He is a great guy with Allison and a great father figurer Brendan. And he can go the distance in making love to Allison. I liked the "secret" blowjob!

That was hot, AF!

Love this! One of the best reads on here in a long time. Well done.

I've been dripping the whole time reading

Good premise.

And there's sex, for sure.

But it starts too abruptly and moves ahead too quickly.

Needs more in the way of foreplay. Touching his cock. Enjoying its feel in her hand/s. Enjoying making him feel good. Dialog about how he feels while she's playing. Dialog about whether he's like her to continue? Faster? Slower? Harder? Softer?

Some extended playing with her breasts.

Something regarding her ass.

Well written, otherwise.

Four stars.

Being an old man, this story fulfilled a long time fantasy. Just about every man's dream situation. Loved it!

You should continue this in the Romance section. What happens next? Do they form a family? Do they have more children? Lots of ways to go.

Another old man who enjoyed all three of your stories, hope you come up with some more entertainment

I’m 70 and really enjoyed reading and progressing with your story knowing the ending but wanting to see how you got there. Thanks don’t stop here there can be more chapters their story.

Beautiful, satisfying, romantic, sexy

sequal please love swtory mabe marrage babys the whole works 5 stars

Loved Lacy Thong calling from Allison's Vagina Inc to conduct phone interview...pay-free sex....!

LOVE women who know what they want and go for it...

Excellent story, really enjoyed reading it, expesselly

Excellent story, really enjoyed reading it. Loved Lacy Thong calling from Allison's Vagina Inc to conduct phone interview...pay-free sex....!

LOVE women who know what they want and go for it...

Your writing is glorious, thank you

Good story, very hot. One nit-picking thing though…having a c-section instead of a vaginal birth isn’t going to ensure a better or tighter experience. I’ve had both, and my husband swears my pussy is better and tighter now than it was before the c-section. Remember, vaginas are muscular. The more you use them the better they can be!

Awesome!