All Comments on 'My Niece Lisa'

by ainu2

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GizmorGizmorabout 12 years ago
Lisa

Really enjoyed your story. Keep'em cumming. Thanks.

r_d_txnr_d_txnabout 12 years ago
Nice

Nice story ... looking forward to the next chapter ...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Wooden

medical text

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Very good idea, but...

I enjoyed the whole idea behind your story. A beautiful niece would be wonderful fun, however, your style of writing makes what could be extremely erotic sound technical. Like reading an instruction manual.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
FRUSTRATED

As I read, I thought this well written, interesting tale was headed for 5 stars.

But when it ended, I started looking for the rest of the story. Unended stories are a peeve of mine.

What's there is 5 stars.

But it's not all there.

Too bad.

Paul in Oklahoma

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I have a niece that looks like cameron diaz & she has the hots for me as well. Her mom, my wife's sister looks like Jennifer Aniston & she has flirted with me since the day I met her sister.

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