by ainu2
I enjoyed the whole idea behind your story. A beautiful niece would be wonderful fun, however, your style of writing makes what could be extremely erotic sound technical. Like reading an instruction manual.
As I read, I thought this well written, interesting tale was headed for 5 stars.
But when it ended, I started looking for the rest of the story. Unended stories are a peeve of mine.
What's there is 5 stars.
But it's not all there.
Too bad.
Paul in Oklahoma
I have a niece that looks like cameron diaz & she has the hots for me as well. Her mom, my wife's sister looks like Jennifer Aniston & she has flirted with me since the day I met her sister.