All Comments on 'My Niece Simone Ch. 01'

To write good porno, you have to IMAGINE it, experience IT & then put your FEELINGS down on paper (type in by keyboard) before the feeling wears OFF. You seem to have done THAT. CONGRATULATIONS & many MORE HORNY experiences!

Very explicit and created the desired effect. I guess I just had phone sex on the screen, ha ha. Really good buildup to the story and I'm already looking forward to Chapter 2.

(Just a note from a dumb blonde: Phone sex isn't what it used to be, now that the phones are smaller.)

5 stars from me....I really liked this concept for a story....and you wrote it well....

Another great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.