All Comments on 'My Own Body: Denial'

by thatbluecat

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Sucks that people have to hide but that is not an excuse to deceive someone.

The victim of Gayle Newland would agree.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Truly gorgeous, this story turned me on, and made me want to cry minutes later. So far all your work is amazing. I can't wait to read the next piece.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
aww

this story turned me on and vrought tears to my eyes. i hope theres more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Aah

Just as beautifully flawless as Caged. Where would I be without your writing? You are truly amazing. Your ability to create a story and develop a character is inspiring. The sex was pretty hot, too ;)

obscuredobscuredabout 13 years ago

Sexy and sad... I love the noir elements! The hat, the dangerous but beautiful woman in a sexy dress. You've got a character here who could star in a big big story! Keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
(:

I hope she somehow ends up going back to that girl.

thatbluecatthatbluecatabout 13 years agoAuthor
From the Author:

This story is related to the short I posted previously, titled "Caged." If you liked this, check out "Caged" and keep an eye out for the sequel. ;)

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