All Comments on 'My Personal Alarm Clock'

Isn't it Tuesday afternoon yet? Next chapter please!

I couldn't have asked for a more positive first comment to my first ever submitted story/chapter. I hope others find my writing and storylines as enjoyable.

keep going

oh wow. great beginning...

now this is the type of teaser they need to have

Excellent start, very well written. I'm eagerly looking forward to the next installment. Could this be the perfect alarm call?

This was awesome keep going!

Really enjoyed it. Well written, grabbed my interest and is clearly building to something. Looking forward to more. I'm glad mom has big, heavy, saggy tits.

What a first story!

I hope you really let all members of this family explore each other!

A very kinky storyline, and I'll be watching for chapter two.

I am eleventh to comment so far - and every one before me is lavish with praise - even grumpy old Anonymous. Wow. Don't know if I have ever seen that before. MF looks like a future prize winner -

Just how many boys do you suppose would love to have a personal alarm clock like that? Their own mother's warn wet mouth on their big stiff prick? And then they blow their young balls down their mother's throat? Probably more than a few, I think.

Looking forward intensely to the ensuing chapters! Mom's wake-up blowjobs, breakfast served wearing a short nightie, promises of later romps with Dad...phew! My mind's reeling, my dick stiffened.

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo,ca

Awesome!

First you said sister was 17 then she was 20. Proofread!