by cameraman12035
5/5, but pretty rape-y. Like to seem some emotion and affection in the next chapter.
Cant wait for more! He absolutely HAS TO get mom and the reverends wife together. Maybe have sis come home unexpectedly and join the fun!!!
Hottest story I've ever read on here!
To hell with the nay-sayers!
You've got a gift - keep writing!
Why not learn how to write conversations correctly, it’s not that tricky.
Sorry it was so long, Ch 1 was posted then taken down and then took a while to get back up and had to rewrite a lit before it was accepted again, still not sure why, but many more chapters already done and will be submitted every few days, Glad you liked it.
BLOWN UP within 5 paragraphs. Clearly you're a MORON. A woman's CLIT is on the OUTSIDE of her mons between the labia minora at the top of the labia. One does not search for nor rub a clit INSIDE the vagina.
GO BACK to STROKE magazine. Buffoon.
it took close eight damn years doing this - WTF + WTF & WTF ....
was everybody in some kinda crazy different dimension :O was everybody in the microscopic universe :O
was everybody in cryogenic-stasis :O was everybody in some magical land doesn't make them age :O
I enjoyed it very much, it was a little unrealistic but it was hot as hell.....I got hard at work while reading it on my break. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.