by cameraman12035
Hope you sort out your linking between chapters and write longer chapters (The last two barely made one). When does the “photogenic” part of Susan come into play? Or was the blackmail bit all it was used for!
Wish you would either write the Karen and Harold story or the Susan and Michael story. They don't seem tied together very well. Not really sure how Kathy fits in at this point other than to create a Micael. Susan and Kathy threesome. If Michael wants his mother so bad how does Kathy even make sense to this story.....?