All Comments on 'My Plus One'

by Smuttyandfun

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naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4uover 2 years ago

5 stars although I wasn't sure of the use of Epilogue to finish the story, seemed a little abrupt after the tremendous tale you had woven. Really enjoyed the confusion between the two, like plucking petals from a daisy.

jlg07jlg07over 2 years ago

Just great stuff! Wonderful story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very well written and an enjoyable read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well that was just amazing! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I always enjoy your stories. They are are often humorous, they are well-written, they do a great job of getting me... Well, you know! Thanks!

SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfireover 2 years ago

Hi, S&F, thanks for another great story! You did a great job bringing them together despite the odds and Marina’s doubts. Great work, 5*!

oldsage_1oldsage_1over 2 years ago

Great story well developed and well written. Really enjoyed it.

Cheers

SAGE

Ravey19Ravey19over 2 years ago

Nothing smutty, well, only a little bit with the rocket cake, and a lot of fun in this sweet lovely romance story. Darius was a hoot and could see through them instantly or was he trying to push them together? Loved Jenn and her sweet fetish. Well done. 5⛤

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

i couldn't stop reading it first class really enjoyed

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wonderful story! I thought it would turn out well and it did. It was romantic and great fun to read. Always on the edge of Henry getting scared away but she kept pulling him back with her love and her skills in the bedroom. It really does pay to be flexible and patient.

TheOldStudTheOldStudabout 2 years ago

Wonderful, wonderful story...

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

A very good enjoyable story. Thanks for writing it.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Writing ILU on a cake did a 360 on them

muskyboymuskyboy6 months ago

Wonderful romance, thanks! 5/5

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