by pudman
This installment really upped the ante, I really liked it. A good chapter, despite the minor spelling errors.
Oh that silly boy of a husband. Some of the best sex ever is with a pregnant wife, girlfriend, or neighbor! Love this story!
YOUR = BELONGS TO = YOUR CAR
YOU'RE = CONTRACTION OF YOU AND ARE = YOU'RE WELCOME
Still a good premise.
Sex still rushed.
Ad you need an editor/proofreader. Here you wrote BARLEY when you meant BARELY. In chapter one you wrote that her pussy juices were MUSTY which means moldy; you meant MUSKY.
Four stars.