All Comments on 'My Pretentious Roommate Ch. 01'

this is a promissing start... can't wait to read what happens next!

Well, ninaknowsall, you certainly know all about college life. You captured the atmosphere of dorm living very well. Looks like this is your first story here on Literotica, but so far so good. Nice slow steady start and an ending to make us interested in coming back. I'm certainly planning to be here when chapter #2 comes out. Thanks, MLF

Too short. Nothing at all happened in this chapter.

Great chapter, I disagree with nothing happening, there needs to be a lot of build up i feel, would be good for the chapter to be longer/more than one to be released at a time as im very turned on now haha

This was great! Can’t wait to read more

Author has the “Lit” well under control. Looking forward to the “Erotica”. Five Stars and Following