by ninaknowsall
OMG! That beautiful out of body feeling, I totally understand what you mean. Poor Conner has got it so bad now, he'd probably let Peter collar and leash him. When this story began, Peter seemed so quiet and prim, just look at him now. I guess it's true when they say the quiet ones are the ones that you have to look out for. Once again, you didn't disappoint, can't wait for chapter #8. Thanks, MLF
Vivid! The pictures you paint with your words, wow.I’m finishing this incredibly erotic chapter absolutely certain that it true: ninaknowsall. Beyond Five Stars
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!! OMG You are a great writher, Very vivid and intimate descriptions. Thank you. Keep it up! THAT WRITING IS CERTAINLY KEEPING MY COCK UP. HEHE
Great story. Well written. Just a few grammatical errors. Would definitely read more of your story’s!