by LunaLover
Really like the story, but I was expecting more "shoe" related material. Don't even think you mentioned what heels the main character was wearing. And I'm sure a shoe store manager would have paid at least a little attention to what she was wearing, especially when he was holding her ankles up and apart. Aside from that I really enjoyed the story and hope to read more.
Great Story! I can still picture my HS English Teacher in that pose. And I am getting ready for my 40th reunion !
So, I am leaving this as anonymous b/c for the life of me I can't remember my user/pword. Loved it of course. Reminded me of um, yeah, a similiar scenario as when it came down to the actual fucking. As far as it goes about the shoes, I think it was perfect the way it was. If I wanted to read about a story with a shoe festish then I would have clicked on the fetish section. Now, as a lifelong friend I suggest you start writing more...or should I say find all your old stuff too and put it on here. From a writer to a writer...kudos to you! <3
Mental note, mustopen a shoe store if this is what goes on in the stockroom!