All Comments on 'My Renaissance Ch. 02'

I just think he tells it with so little gusto for as amazing as the women he is with sound his "voice" doesn't seem overly into the otherwise hot situations. no his stomach sank moments as the soon to be ex described her date fucking her, he just seems flat. otherwise great setups, great descriptions of women and their movements. the women seem real enough or at least showing emotions.

Story was good, but man, you lost me when you used a Dan Brown book to show that she knows "good authors." That's the opposite of what a Dan Brown book on the coffee table means.

meh