All Comments on 'My Revelation'

What a beautifully told chapter, you really have to be desirious of this situation to enjoy it.

After "Beach Party", this has led me down a path where I search for more, so please keep the story continuing.

What I can't understand is why you haven't recieved more comments on your stories, they are so well expressed and the erotic element is so high.

Perhaps there aren't enough women out there, like me, who love to be stimulated by the feel and taste of another woman, especially if it requires you to be a total "slut", I love it and want to read a lot more of your works.

Good Read I love this story and the last one and every one of your stories I hope you make more stories

A well told story about a lucky girl becoming a collared slave. Plenty of the slaves emotions. More about this slave and her Mistress and slave sisters please.