All Comments on 'My Rival / My Rival Ch. 04'

There aren't enough stars for these ladies.

Best chapter yet!

You bring me so much joy when you post. I love this story and can't wait for more.

As a near hopeless romantic, loved this storyline and the main characters from the start. Their relationship has gelled romantically and erotically in fits and starts just as expected for the two uniquely different characters you’ve created. A lot of fun “watching” them come/cum together — OK, OK could not help myself :). xxxxx

Finally! I have been waiting for this! And boy this was not a disappointment! This was such an emotional chapter. I know you don't use Love that often with your characters, so I think it's incredible the way you used it here. This has become so much more than an erotic story. It's emotionally compelling and brings tears to my eyes almost every chapter. You did an excellent job!! 5 stars!

Incredible job! Bravo! This might be your best work yet! 🥳

Hope this doesn't make anyone too sad but the next chapter will be the finale. Maybe some day, in the far far future, I can write about them again. But until then, let's give them the proper send off they deserve!

Expect the finale next week.

Its amazing how your able to develop a relationship and find the right balance between emotion, love, erotica in your stories. Awesome characters that are hard not to like and love.

Your easily one of masters in writing on here.

Great job! If the first 4 chapters were this good then ch5 will be spectacular! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Such wonderful comments. I want to cry! Thank you so much!

I am sad that we only get one more chapter with these two. You have dome such a lovely Job developing their relationship, both erotically and, for me at least, emotionally. Beautiful love story....when it is done, I shall miss them. thanks for your storytelling.

Another Awesome Chapter!

One of the best "Love Stories🎉" I have read in a very long time.

Great Writing & Certainly 5*-Stars

Really love this, as said up there with the best, thanks

I have enjoyed all of your series, but this one is so down to earth, and such a wonderfully burgeoning love story, it is my fave. I will be sad to see them go, but I'm sure you will have another wonderful set of characters to entertain us.

What a happy love story…both exceptional loving women!

Brings tears to my eyes…love to experience this!

Thanks