All Comments on 'My Road Trip with Zoe'

Superb writing, I loved it. I gave my wife such a fucking having got so hard reading this. Thank you.

Excellent...as usual.

Fun humping fantasy.

This is a very sexy story. I want this. For me before I die.

I honestly get on Literotica every once in a while and make a note to see if you've published anything lately. Just happened to see this right as it came out. Great work.

So hot you need to write Zoe and Bff Dad story in full !!!!

A bit long but that didn't detract from a well written story. Some minor errors were annoying tho. ie the wsitredd ignored her fake idea or this young lady could more her body. No real biggie. Hoping to read more of these two.

3 stars

DragonRider55

Hawt. Hawt as fuck!

Just wonderful. Everymans ideal fantasy!!

Divorce, Ruined friendship, and eventually lost job. I love a May/December but not like this. Lame.

Great story. Loved the long slow build up and the payoff was incredibly hot. I was waiting to have her confess that she made up the story about her roommate’s dad just to tease and seduce her Road buddy.

Fun story. The length was necessary for the build up. I wanted him to take her as bad as he wanted it. There are a few typos. No big deal, they didn’t detract from the story.

Damn that was so hot! - you really do have a way with words ....a return journey is a must!

PLEASE!

The best writer on Literotica strikes again! Please continue your "career" with more stories. Or add to some of your classics. Thank you.

I would love a part two with both her lovers

I love this story. Pity one can give only five points. This one certainly deserves more.

Without a doubt, the best I"ve ever had.

Damn i love older men since i got with my dads best friend i had a crush on him for ages and finally got him to fuck me after standing naked in my room for him to see when he walked past. It worked and he was into me so fast im glad i was taking contraception as he filled me with jizz so quick. We have had sex together nearly a year now and everywhere we can even outside which is a real buzz as he is the only guy iv done anal sex with as well.

Great story that rings true.

this is insanely good!! it’s too good (and too hot) for my brain to even function enough for me to write a coherent comment rn; i just knew i had to write something anyway because it’s just. insane. so so sensual, such an interesting take on this trope. don’t get me wrong, i love me the good old clichés that come with it (hell, i opened this story looking for them!) but this was just such a natural, realistic take on it - and the best part is you were able to make it that way without removing the taboo atmosphere that we search for when looking for a story like this. i’m obsessed. thank you so much for posting!

This needs a sequel!! Amazing story!

I loved this story the first time I read it and made itt one of my favorites. I just read it again what a great sexy story may end up reading I it again in another 6 months or so. Very good I hope there’s a part 2 sometime soon.

Excellent job. Keep writing please, either a sequel or just more good stories.

What a story....I AM surprised there was no 'road sex', the way they were exciting each other while Zoe told her story.

Older guys DO appreciate a younger woman, and even a teen girl, like this. Both get the advantage of the guy's experience (and hopefully, his maturity), while the youthfulness and energy add to both their enjoyment!

5/5Stars...would love to see a sequel!

Don't stop writing.....

Stupendous writing. Could so easy have become smutty. But written so elegantly. Build up to the flat exceptional and so sensuous. Wish I read when I was 18. Would have helped make me a far better lover. Five plus all the way.

Possibly one of the best build ups I’ve seen written here on Lit, very very good indeed, you didn’t drift into smut or cheapen the writing with ott sex, pretty much on the money for me. Very much a 5⭐️ Story, many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.

Jill was a BITCH!! Any wife that openly embarrasses her husband in front of others is just another whore

Wow fucking fantastic

Awesome story! You are one of my favorite authors on Lit!

Great story! There's a lot of build up and anticipation for Derek during the trip, and for me reading it. I think he did a great job handling the entire situation. Slow and cool early but I understand where the lust takes him. Although the line about weed making him horny was way too early as she hadn't breached the sexual opening so to speak. That could have slammed the door. Hopefully there will be a sequel.

Zoe was one hot 19 year old woman. She enjoyed getting plowed by older men.

I just finished page 1, but one thing is bugging me. Who takes a full bottle of good bourbon for a 2 day road trip, especially when you have to fly to your next stop? Liquid restrictions means he would have to dump whatever he didn't drink before going through airport security. Is he an alcoholic?

Good story, great build up.