All Comments on 'My Rock'

Loved your well written story and am looking forward to reading more from you.

This story is nicely paced, it has good structure, and you (the writer) show an above-average skill as a wordsmith. Please keep up the good work!

Realistic and well written. This type of affair can work very well

Some minor grammatical issues like Roberts (penis) and it's used as a possessive (it isn't), regardless though, a story that broke the conventions of complete sentences and did so effectively. I really liked it and hope to read more from you!

Nice flowing story that hit all the right notes. I can relate to the moving feelings of a brothers love and the ultimate giving of oneself . Would have loved to hear the beginning of the relationship and how it evolved. Maybe next story?

A very nice story, I have not read

many with Brother and sister and this

story has a nice flow to it and actually

made me wonder what it would be like

if I could have that kind of intimacy with

my sister. I really enjoyed this story.

No need to regret this action or thought; it was a wonderful expression of a beautiful experience. Hopefully you have others stories to tell us.

Wonderful story about brother sister love. The build up was great, not to fast and not to slow. I hope you write a follow up or continue with other stories. Family love is the best and I enjoy reading about it. Keep up the good work.

Mary

For a beautiful mid-life still-in-her-sexual-prime married wife to her (seldom home) husband of 23 years, seems to have found herself an additional pleasure--auspiciously and pleasingly for her readers--of writing a momentuous story of basic human love! Just as importantly, the ultimate lover's story is the male and female love story of a sister and brother! 'The Rock' is a monumental story with deep convictions of two people's over-whelming love for each other. This story is one of my three top choices for the best written, and thus best reading, story of my life!! Of course, I am partial and biased as my favorite content and subject matter is brother and sister, mother and son, and father and daughter incestual, and exotic love and romance and family.

'Kathleen48' has just hit the ultimate World Series of baseball with a bases-loaded down-three-runs in the bottom of the ninth-inning homerun, and the combined Super Bowl with only one-second left in the game, and a run back a 109 yards kick-off return for the winning touchdown!! Only a very few writer's have her depth and ability with words to form such a magnificent saga, and with epic formulation!

Keep writing Lady! Though this story, the most decent I've ever read, seems to have been garnered from real life experiences, your imaginative assets can easily write fiction of an incestual nature and equal in quality!!

You have a talent, so I'm surprised that you have only the one submission. I know that I would like to read more of your work, so hopefully we haven't heard the last from Kathleen48?.

thank you

Please write more.

Great story, I really like it.

I'm a huge fan of well written erotic stories, especially incest stories, where there is an emotional connection, a deep rooted bond between the characters, especially written within a scenario that is both plausible, believable and appealing! Well done! I hope there's more to come! The bonus that both are not teens frenzy with hormones, booze or other circumstances makes it even more exciting!!

Best always,

Ray

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What a wonderful story of brother/sister love....I'm sorta in the same boat myself because I fantasize frequently of my older sis....40 and 45 respectively speaking,plus we're both single! Lol,but seriously one day I'll get the nerve to try something...And if she feels the same way,It'll be the greatest day of my life...Thank you again for your submission,and hopefully more on the way? 😉

All brothers and sisters should experience such uninhibited love.

A brother sister story at it's very best. So believable I'm wondering if it's true. I wonder where they are now.

Kathleen,

This was lovely, adult brother and sister enjoying a bit of hanky panky but as these things go there must or should be more. I think many would agree.

Great story Kathleen. I gave you 5 stars.

Teriffic story. Well written. I know two people this could well be about. The situation as described here could so easily happen and DOES! So very arousing to read this account.

Thanks for finding me and reaching out. What a great story. I'm curious why you're not a regular.

Is this for real? The author writes so well, so movingly.

I think she must have experienced something like this herself---Or is it all in her imagination? The sex was so loving and satisfying to me me, the reader. Please write more

We'd love to hear more about these two. Surely something further happened.

-MM

Thanks for sharing this. Whether it really happened or is a fantasy, I loved reading your most intimate thoughts. I feel like we were — I was — given a gift of honesty and vulnerability. Thank you. I hope you’re able to wrestle with your feelings of guilt or shame. You deserve happiness as much as anyone, and you desire what you desire. I wish you well.

Incest between siblings is interesting. I read this because the author commented on another story. Any story that involves women enjoying a man’s desire to give oral pleasure warrants reading.

I do believe these things happen. And am inclined to think this story has an element of truth to it. It really rings true. So movingly written. Memories!

beautiful.

I wonder what has happened to them since.

If it's for real, and I think it may well be, Then I doubt if it stopped there.

Nicely written.