All Comments on 'My Roommate Takes My Girlfriend'

Hey clarkoverns,

This is just a story right?

Because I just read another cuck story by "A. Smith" from 2002 that claimed to have happened in 1996 and continued until at least 2002 that has me boiling with rage...

So I want to know if this is a real story or fiction?

My boyfriend attended college in another city. He was telling me he had found a good roommate (well, so thought). The roommate was an asshole when dealing with girlfriends. He was rich and a bit arrogant.

I was visiting my boyfriend regularly. On most weekends i came to be with him his roommate was away, his town was not that far. However as the academic year progressed he stopped going home.

I was young and insecure and he was an asshole with me the moment my boyfriend stepped out of the room let alone the apartment.

"Let me touch your bum & your thighs, i won't tell anybody."

"OK, then just give me a hug..."

I thought i was saying no but his advances escalated and he started touching me when i was in the kitchen or anywhere as long as my boyfriend was not there. i never reported anything to my boyfriend & i did not know how to tell him his roommate had been regularly grabbing my ass, petting my boobs & kissing my neck & my thighs. his roommate became very nice to me and we started making out behind my boyfriend's back. One thing led to another & we ended up having sex (we had sex twice only!) The roomate was good in bed! He was way more experienced than my boyfriend.

Next year the roommate stayed home, his father gave hom a position in the family business. I went back to school & moved in with my boyfriend. Both him and i are from kind-of conservative immigrant families & i never told my boyfriend what had happened. The roomate was an asshole but he kept the secret like a gentleman. The boyfriend is my present-day husband and we have 3 beutiful daughters.

My girlfriend and I were going to the drive in with my brother and his girlfriend. We left and picked up my girlfriend and went to my brother's girlfriends house. He came back and got in the car and told us that his girlfriend was sick and couldn't go. He told me to drop him off at home and that we should go to the drive in. I felt kind of bad since we were using his car so I said why don't you come with us.

At the drive in, my brother parked in the back roll and we got out and bought sodas and popcorn. Julie and I got in the back seat and my brother got in the front. Just before the movie started, Julie told my brother to get in the back with us. So when the movie started, Julie was between us in the back seat of my brother's car. I had really been looking forward to the drive in since I thought that I might get into Julie's pants for the first time particularly if my brother and his girlfriend fucked. I decided to see if Julie might still be willing and undid her top that she had tied under her breasts. Then Julie took off her top and was naked from the waist up with my brother and I looking at her breasts. I kissed her and then I leaned down and kissed her left breast. While I was kissing her breast, my brother kissed her and then kissed her right breast. I watched as he was kissing her breast and decided to see how far Julie would go. I undid her shorts and when I pulled on them she lifted her butt up and I pulled them off. Along with her shorts, her panties also came off. Now my girlfriend was totally naked between my brother and me. I took my clothes off while my brother was again kissing Julie with his hand between her legs. When he stopped kissing her, I took over and kissed her. My brother took off his clothes and my naked girlfriend Julie was now between two naked horny guys.

Julie was looking at each of us and then she moved and took my erect dick into her mouth. But the way she moved, she had her butt pointed at my brother who wasted no time pushing his dick into her. As he pushed into her for the third time she cried out and he was now all the way inside her. Julie laid her head in my lap as my brother fucked her and filled her with his cum. I was still lying there with my erection when Julie realized what had happened. She laid on her back and told me to fuck her. I got between her legs and stuck my dick into her. I went in all the way on the first push because she was no longer a virgin and my brother's cum made my dick slide right in. I came after only a few strokes.

Julie told me that I had been too quick and she hadn't come yet. Then she asked my brother if he would fuck her again so that she could come. My brother got between Julie's legs. As he was sticking his dick into her for the second time, she pulled me down and we kissed. We had been kissing for a while when she started to moan and then she started coming. While she was coming, my brother came inside her for the second time. Now I had another erection and as soon as my brother pulled out of my girlfriend, I got between her legs and fucked her and she came again and I came inside her.

My brother then got dressed and got in the front seat and we left the drive in since the movies were over. Julie and I were still naked in the back seat as we left the drive in and my brother stopped by the ticket booth and talked with a friend that was working there. My brother's friend got a good look at Julie lying there in the back seat because when Julie noticed that he was looking, she spread her legs and actually smiled as he was looking at her. My brother told his friend that she was my girlfriend and we had both fucked her but he had fucked her first and taken her virginity.

On Monday, when we were in school, we heard that almost everyone knew that Julie wasn't a virgin and that my brother had been the first one to fuck her. Julie told me after school that maybe we should break up since everyone knew that I wasn't the first guy to fuck her. I told her that I didn't care and that I wanted to be her boyfriend.

i can believe your story it really turned me on reliving the whole thing a see my gf did a similer thing to me she always got what she wanted and blamed me for it and yes i always got so hard i remember the first time we gave a friend a ride home and he took off her shirt and bra and sat between us with her boobs in the open i just couldnt help but reach up and play with one closest to me i felt her relaxe as i flicked her nipple she laid back in the seat a put her arms over her head as i was driving i looked over to see himplaying with the other boob she was loving it she later said once ive been touch by two men ill never forget it any way it wasent long and he was sucking on a nipple that really gets her going that also gave him axcess to her pants he opened her snap and pulled down her sipper andstarted fingering her i could smell her excitment i was so mad what she was giving him and so horny at the same time you cant believe it untill you have experanced it he moved up and kissed her isaw her toung reach for him he took the que and frenching and fingering her hard suddenly he pulled away she put her hands down and stripped off her jeans and underware in one pass naked but for her socks she turned to him her back to me i could hear his belt come loose and zipper down i saw her reach in and take him out she started stroking as if to get him hard but he was more than ready she put her head down a begin sucking him she was on all fours her but toward me she smells so good i ccould hear sounds of her sucking him and his fingers in her pussy making it even wetter than i said the wrong thing why dont you suck on me a while she didnt hesitate she knew it would give her friend axcess to her she pulled up kissed him once turned to me undid my pants and began her work on me at this point our friend puts his nose to work and follows it to her pussyi look over her buts up and all i could see is his eyes his toungs worken her over good she stsrts to rock and says im going to cum he than grabes her and pulls her on his shaft she rides him leg around him and the seat her whole body shakeswhile see comes she sit on him down hard his hands around her back shes looking at me and mouthes the words fuck me closes her eyes and screems with delight she stayes on him for at least a half hour she cums an other two times them he unloads she more than willingto have all he has that makes her cum the fourth time we drop him off and head home our selves

Its good but its just that if it was me I would've said something to her about me knowing what happened before I would go beat my roommate's ass....But that's me

Its really hot. You have my attention but i don't like it because i don't know the real story i only know what she said happened and we know she lies. So i want to know what really happen in the bathroom and what really happen after the dumbass went to bed. Not her lies.

Guess I just found myself reading this and I personally would have broken my roommates face and kicked Becky to the streets. I cant think of someone taking my girl while I do nothing.

ever since dao caught me sucking ethan's dick, shes only let him fuck her, despite that i'm still her boyfriend... it doesn't really bother me though, because i know his dick is bigger and she loves him more

As a cuckwannabe, I love your story. There is nothing hotter than when other males dominate my wife's attention, especially when I am there to witness. I will be reading more! Thanks for writing.

I recall a similar story to this, almost everything in this story happened, but then the girlfriend took it even further, anyone know the name of this story?

what a bitch

Needless to say, you are an idiot.

A similar thing happened to me when I cam home and found my former black room mate who was staying with us, fucking my wife over the back of the lounger. What shocked me most was that I could see he had a huge cock and was not using a condom. This meant his cock would be nudging into her fertile and totally unprotected. womb.I was so taken aback that I just stared through the crack in the door and couldn't break the spell. When he said he was coming my wife told him he should pull out, but he just ignored her and suddenly tensed up and filled her cunt with his sperm. What then shocked me was my wife saying 'yes put a baby in my belly'. Needless to say our first baby turned out to be black and she had some explaining to do!

I AM 63. I CHEATED ON MY FIRST AND SECOND WIFE. MY FIRST WIFE CHEATED ON ME & THAT WAS WHY WE DIVORCED. I DO NOT KNOW WHETHER MY SECOND WIFE EVER HAD AN AFFAIR BUT I CAN TELL YOU I WAS ENCOURAGING HER. SHE IS 61 NOW, LOOKS 51. WHEN SHE WAS 40 SHE WAS AN A+ HOT WIFE. GUYS WERE HITTING ON HER LEFT, RIGHT AND CENTER. I WAS GETTING A PERVERSE KICK OUT OF IT, BUT I SURE DID NOT FEEL GUILTY ALTHOUGH I KNEW I WAS "GUILTY AS CHARGED". I WANTED HER TO FUCK ANOTHER MAN, OTHER MEN. I FANTASIZED SHE IS COMING HOME AFTER BEING FUCKED AND I CUDDLE HER AND FUCK HER MYSELF.

SOME PEOPLE WILL THINK I WAS A SICK FUCK. SO WHAT, THAT WAS MY KARMA, MY DESTINY I ACCEPTED WITHOUT RESERVATIONS.

HAVING SAID THE ABOVE, I HAVE A COMMENT:

SOME READERS MISUNDERSTOOD THE BOYFRIEND'S CHARACTER. HE IS THORN BETWEEN THE PLEASURE HE GETS OUT OF HER INFATUATION (& EVENTUALLY THE AFFAIR) WITH HIS ROOMMATE AND HIS UPBRINGING AND MINDSET WHEREBY SHE SHOULD BE FAITHFUL. HE IS NOT WEAK, HE JUST FEELS GUILTY ABOUT GETTING A KICK OUT OF THE SITUATION. HE IS DISCOVERING A SIDE OF HIMSELF HE WAS NEVER AWARE OF. AS TOUGH IT WERE HIS KARMA TO HAVE A "LOVING WIFE," HE LIVES HIS KARMA... & LOVES IT BUT IS NOT READY AS YET TO ADMIT IT TO HIMSELF. HE IS LIKE A PROTAGONIST IN A GREEK TRAGEDY WHO, IN SPITE OF ALL HIS EFFORTS, CANNOT ESCAPE HIS PREDETERMINED DESTINY. FROM AN UNREPENTANT SICK FUCK'S POINT OF VIEW, HE IS A LUCKY SON OF A GUN.

Great story. Would love to walk into my living room and see my wife naked and bent over with another man screwing her.

I didn't know it was fiction great job

Well written, fun, and kinky

Maybe she just wanted some time with a real man...

People are really trying to give advice to the main character about how to deal with his girlfriend?

Y'all need to take a break from the interwebs and enjoy this thing I like to call “reality”.

It is time for him to dump the hoe!

to people who posted some of the comments:

This is a story, take it easy, guys. Nobody is telling you that you should try what is in it. It is a piece of fiction. Yes, some people do find themselves in situations similar to the this story. They each react in different ways. Different strokes for different folks. To each his own. Let them be.

The narrator of the story was getting a kick out of the situation... and then some: he was a willing participant in what was going on.

It takes two to tango for most of us. For some of us it takes 3 (I do not know if they are cursed or blessed or just different).

4 stars: This story is erotic but not pornographic. Good job! Good read. Thanks.

Why he would have any question about what to do? His girlfriend has demonstrated, by her actions, that she's unreliable at best and a slut at worst. Why would he stick around with her? The old cliche' applies - "actions speak louder than words". Find a new girlfriend.

Out of the dozens of stories I've read on Literotica to date, I think this is the one I enjoyed the most.

Sequels are also decent.

He needs to confront Becky right this moment about her constant lying. She's even more responsible for what's happened than his so-called friend Mark. They're both taking him for a fool, and - worse - she'll probably try and foist Mark's kid upon him. Best to kick the two-faced slut out of his life immediately.

It's funny to read all the comments that try to analyze, justify, or condemn the story's characters. It's just a story folks! You really shouldn't try to turn it into real life. You'll disappoint yourself.

Often times the first instincts is for us to become enraged when a woman does this to us, to want to fight against the person who is hurting us, the other instinct is to cry like he did, submit to the thing and let it control us. But I have found the best option is to subvert and return the favor to a cheater. Lie in wait for them to do such things again and when you can gain evidence in your favor, so that when you break it off with her and spread it around town that she is a harlot, then you can have the satisfaction of seeing her squirm around her friends and family. The best way to get even with a woman is not physical, in fact no matter what a woman has done you should never lay hands on her, instead hurt her where she will feel the most pain. If you don't believe me, then think about why your girl always asks you if she looks fat in that outfit or why they wonder what other people are thinking? Imagine her horror knowing that she will go the rest of her life thinking about whether her friends and family or someone on the street is talking about how they know that she is a whore and cheated, revenge is cold, but sweet to the victor my friends.

nice not to embarrase her should encourage more action write another story involve friend with big cock to strip her naked and fuck her in apartment too or party gang bang fucking hot story

I DID MY ROOMATES GIRL JUST LIKE THIS, BUT I FUCKED HER IN HIS BED AND GOT HER PREGNANT

let them have her, and he dodged a poor situation for him. Change living arrangements too

Fuck that I would of killed him, especially if u cared so much for her. She obviously wasn't with u for your looks.

I enjoyed it :) all wet now...

This is so awesome, there should defo be another chapter!

when a partner cheats, it isn't always because of weakness in the cheater, but sometimes because of what the wife/husband failed to prevent

Love that the ending also makes you think back. She probably sucked his dick in the bathroom that other time. Love that he's a wimp, it allows for her cheating ways to take place, and that's what makes this story hot. I don't know why everybody is saying he should have been more firm with HER though. Why not talk to his roommate? That was the only under-developed relationship in the story. Love how the girlfriend was hurt when the roommate brought home a girl. I know this is an old story, but it's a really good one. How cheating stories should be written. Only wish there was a little more after this. Not another chapter, but the ending was a little abrupt after such a good buildup.

I liked it. My favorite stories include descriptions of sexy panties and bras; teasing is always a great turn on...

Actually quite a lot of guys put up with similar behaviour either before or after marriage. Many more don't know what their partners get up to behind their backs. Those in denial are the biggest fools of all but as we see here plenty of those about.

He can blame himself for allowing her to play her little game of show and tell. He should have put a stop to that right away. Of course that probably would not have kept her from boning his roommate. His only option now is to throw her out. He needs to also throw out the roommate as she would probably take up with him anyway.

I don't think I want to see another chapter. The fact that the author ended it with him admitting he had a boner probably means that another chapter will see him becoming a willing cuckold rather than a real man. No real man would put up with that crap.

Very erotic tale and written well, although some of the descriptive narrative seemed a bit forced at times. Still, the overall erotic tension remained built up through the end.

It would be been nice to have this as a series; although, after reading the second story, it seems you succumbed to the crowd of complainers who voiced their opinions on him breaking up with her. Would be interesting to see her adventures continue...

As the saying always goes; once a cheater-always a cheater. Only fags like shoe-no-IQ get married to these type of skanks.

Now he knows two things: His girlfriend will cheat on him...and she will lie about it.<P>

Good things to know before you get married because she will not change her ways. And he has to come to grips with the fact that his mind and body are headed in opposite directions. Mentally he hates what she is doing. Physically he is turned on by it. Sucks to be him.<P>

Is he that much of a loser that he has to stay with a hot but deceitful g/f? Make the call.<P>

Thanks for sharing.

Please continue this story. By far it is your best. The Carl and Lauren seems to be running out of steam but this one has so much more scope. Please continue

...but I would like to see a second chapter, during which he'll presumably confront his cheating girlfriend. Flashing his roommate is one thing, fucking him and lying about it is quite another. I wouldn't be surprised if she gave the other guy more of a show, either, maybe even blew him.

Awesome story, solid writing, believable characters. Very hot. Loved it.

Oh you lucky guy. A red hot girlfriend whos a real tease. Just enjoy her and all her stories.

Great story. Well done!

Really enjoyed this. Thanks for writing it. :)

Really cool story!

Hope you write another chapter!

Great story! Please continue it.

Glad to see you're writing again. I really like all your work. I'd love to see a sequel to this story.

Someone said the master of cuck stories is back - they were definitely right! more more more!

It's funny how jealousy can be such a powerful aphrodisiac. I also enjoyed the sort of twisted thought process that she was doing it for him. For my personal taste, and to echo some of the other comments here, the biggest drawback of the story was the pain felt by your protagonist. I think there is a certain line where the hesitation, confusion and uncertainty is exciting... But when you drop a bomb like "holding back tears", it sort of brings the reader back down to reality too hard. But this, like anything posted here, is just one reader's opinion. It's your story, you write it how you want to! Thank you for sharing.

Another good one....More please!

i enjoyed this story, hope to read more!

More chapters please. Love Becky, surely she can find more lads to expose herself to and then fuck, while teasing her fella about it all.

welcome back!

Right after the girlfriend shows Mark her bush for the first time, she has sex with the boyfriend and he cums inside her. Later, right before Mark cums inside her, you say that she never lets the boyfriend cum inside her. BE CONSISTENT.

...if the boyfriend wasn't a useless wimp who has a deceitful girlfriend. The girl is a whole lot less likable when she's treating her boyfriend like crap and the guy is a whole lot less sympathetic by being too weak to stand up for himself.<p>

If he were complicit in her exhibtionism it would've been a much hotter story. They both should be in on it. Little baby steps here and there, testing the uncertain waters with each other, pushing each other bit by bit. Sometimes it's her idea, sometimes it's his but nobody's lying or hiding anything and they're both getting off on her antics.<p>

Instead, something that could've been really hot is turning into something really ugly.<p>

Still thought it was a good story though; a well written story. That's why I gave it a 75. It could've easily been a 100 though, just by allowing us to like these people more.

This poor guy is a sad excuse of a guy. So blinded by her apparent fine body that he'd let her do anything with it, in the name of "keeping HIM" happy.

He should have seen the writing on the wall after the first incident...since he never once suggested ANYTHING to her about his like, or dislike, of exhibitionism.

I'd have dumped the cheap whore on the second incident.

Now, had the scenario turned into a 3-way so that the boyfriend hadn't been made out to be a buffoon, it'd have been a hotter 'read'.

And what a return! Nice, man. :)