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Solid story but when mark was fucking her she said to cum in he David said she never let him do that but literally the part before he said he can in her and she orgasmed

Laid there just wondering what I was going to do. When I figured out that the girl that I would marry was messing with an arrogant asshole that I couldn't stand. I didn't ask her for another date. She approached me and asked if I was going to ask her to the dance the next Saturday evening. I politely said no that I figured she would be with Thomas the big football star. I walked away. I would speak to her after that but that was it. I actually married a friend of hers. We had been married for 28 years 2 children and happened to see her at a party. I did the same thing spoke very few words being polite. Later visiting with friends and found out that she was on her 5th marriage of which 3 husband's had died. My goodness was I lucky. No she and Thomas had not married.

I don’t get it? Cheating whore is cancelled out by baseball bat to head. Story over!

I appreciated the story, with that I kept wondering if they really loved each other, then why you did not pen a more conflicting emotion within, and between them both. Those relationships are hard to navigate, usually with her doing some kind of balancing act to appease the struggles she now has. If she really does love him, she really must still respect him, although her own mind and body testifies differently. Its not just his struggle of emotional flip flops, its hers as well. In these relationships devotion not just in loyalty, but enthusiasm for the relationship will be tested fully when only the wife is sharing.

Maybe my fave of yours but damn you have so many good ones to appreciate. This is the one that kept me coming back! Love the build up, angst, tease... very well done.

I counted it as a blessing and walked away after learning what a bitch she was and that he really wasn't a friend.

Great story. Great writing

The boyfriend was such a wuss. Poor thing was Always out of it, or too tired or scared to confront his girlfriend. The boyfriend needs to run home to Mama and cry to her about his girlfriend 😢

ये तो होता ही रहता है

मेरे पत्नी का एक कजिन हमारे साथ रहता था. उसने मेरे बीबी से काफी बार चोदा है और कई बार मैने उन्हे देखा है

Yes he helped me prove that she was a cheater. Thank you roommate.

Get the heck away she has no respect for you or your marriage.

Mmm, Mark was so sexy and the bf was a wimp. Love this story clarkoverns, are you still around on Literotica? I noticed you haven’t written anything in years sadly. DM me some time, I’m got so many questions about your kinky stories. All the best 😘

GF like her is not worth keeping. They'll definitely cheat somehow behind the back and that's also deliberately.

For sure time to leave the bitch.

this is sad. I would have left the cheating bitch

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I was in the hospital and my roommate and I were visiting after we had recovered from surgery. He had explained that when there was a problem at work and they sent everyone home early he invited some work buddies to have a beer at his house. He tried to call his wife and warn her about them coming. She didn't answer so he left a message. Imagine the surprise when they walked in and caught another man in bed with her. I'll call my hospital roommate John. John walked of to the bed and shook the guys hand and thanked him for showing him what kind of a slut his wife was. Then he said it would be in your best concern for both of you to leave now. John returned to the kitchen to get beers and went to the living room. When his wife and friends were leaving one of his work buddies tripped her friend. Then he stood up and said hey dumbass watch where you are walking. Well before the guy was out of the apartment every work mate had hit him. He couldn't hardly walk. His work buddies helped throw all of his wife's belongings in trash bags in the hallway. He did text her and let her know because the apartment manager would throw anything in the hallways in the trash. He divorced her and now is married to a faithful wife. The shocker is that it's the same one. I wish them the best of luck.

When my roommate bf was over I would come out in my bra and thong . I would see his cock get hard. I would leave my bedroom door open enough so he was able to see in I would be nude. One day when we're alone I told him I seen him looking. He told me he want to fuck me. I let him. We had great sex over the next few weeks. One day my roommate ask me if I would be into a 3 way with them . I did join them many times.

Liars are a dime a dozen. Tho Beautiful and Sexy, I would probably dump her for Not being able, to tell the truth!

5 stars to the writer. Great writing, Great Story. Tense Ending. Fun gal, I've had many like that. Fun while it lasted until she brings home an STI or Crabbs. Thanks

Change the title to my girlfriend seduces my roommate.

She had her boyfriend cum in her in the beginning and later he said she never let him cum in her.

Less than a month after my wedding, I caught my wife blowing my best man.

I broke up with my first real girlfriend that I thought that I was going to marry and spend my life with. The reason for breaking up was she attended a party while I had to work and she was drinking and having a grand old time and exposed herself to anyone who wanted to look. When I found out I asked her if she showed her breast to anyone who wanted to look at the party? She dropped her head and didn't say anything. I asked for my ring back. I walked away as she was crying. I ran into her parents a week and a half later. Her mother asked why I broke up with her daughter? I said that she should ask there daughter. Her mother said they did but she would not tell them why.I said I was sorry but it was up to their daughter to tell them I wouldn't. I seen her mother a week later and she was apologizing. I thanked her and said that was more than her daughter did. Months later I met my future wife and we married. No children yet and 4 years later she went to a party drank too much and exposed herself to the crowd. When I found out I thought dammit what's with these women that I attract. I divorced her. Then a month after my divorce I ran into my high-school sweetheart that I had broken up with while I was eating alone in a restaurant. She came up to me and asked if she could set with me? I said sure. We had a good time visiting. At the end she asked me out. All of my feelings I had before were back already. I said I would not want to relive what I went through before. She said I wouldn't it was the alcohol and her not thinking clearly. What would happen if she went anywhere and drank too much and I wasn't there. She said she hadn't drank anymore than a beer or 2 and never over one mixed drink and haven't been on a date after I broke up with her. We now have 3 children and 4 grandchildren.

Time and distance. Time and distance. Leave, get away, and thank God you dodged a bullet. More tuna in the sea, so to speak. One would never know whose children she had unless there was a mandatory paternity test. Who would want such a relationship?

Don't be mad at the roommate. Slut girl friend was chasing him. Now dump her. You dodged a bullet.

'She should have rolled him over, climbed on his stiff dick, and rode him with sloppy seconds.

Lying Slut...Flip Her Over...Fuck Her Ass...Cum on her Face ...Make Her Lick Me Clean and Throw Her Ass OUT!

HOT 5stars

wimp and whore

Chapter 2 guy finds his girlfriend getting fucked by the roommate again, except this time he hears her proclaiming to the roommate that she's his now screaming "it's your pussy, daddy!!" And then after they're done fucking she makes boyfriend eat out the roommates cum from her pussy!!! Js

This is one of the hottest roommate stories I have read!

This is definitely one of the hottest roommate stories I have read!

I find many of the anonymous negative comments funny especially when they complain about a common sense test reading erotic fiction. WTF? This is a place for fun stories that push the boundaries of what we experience in our lives.

A bunch of crap. Terrible story. This doesn't pass the common sense test.

I guess I'm part of the group that's not into this. 2*

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Hot! Hot! Hot!

★★★★★+ (5.5=110% "above expectations")!

This is one of the top 10 roommate-fucks-girlfriend stories on Literotica! In my book,

it is a MUST READ.

As on Aug 23/21, it has got 1.4k faves, out of 1.58 million views, which is 0.88 faves per 1k views, an A-plus faves-to-views ratio!

My Roommate Takes My Girlfriend is an

'A+ story.' I believe that it exceeds the expectations most Literotica users have.

If you are into roommate-fucks-girlfriend stories, this one is a MUST READ for you. Trust me.

Ummmmm, very hot!!!

Always wondered if someones done some artwork of Becky, curious on more exactly what shed look like.

Unless he was supposed to be a friend. Be glad she's gone there are a lot of good women out there. Besides she will more than likely cheat on him also.

How dumb could a man be? If I had tears in my eyes it would be from being mad. And I would figure out a way to get even.

George a friend of mine seen his wife Deb screwing a guy on their living room floor when he got home early. He didn't even confront them. He found his children at her parrents by driving by so he stopped to pick them up. Debs mother Jan asked where was Deb. George said she was to busy so he came to pick them up. Jan said she thought they were spending the weekend. George explained he got home early so plans changed. After leaving he went to an empty furnished rental of a friend. Thing's didn't start happening until he was not home Saturday on time. Deb call him acting worried and George said are the children there? Deb said they were at her parents so they could have a little alone time when would you he be home? George said that depended on what was worked out between them. She asked what he was meant? George said he was at the house last night and didn't like what he saw. She began crying saying it was a mistake. He said yes it was where do we go from here? She said it was the only time and hopped they could work through it. George said ok his lawyer would be in touch. She was crying saying can't we work through this she didn't want a divorce? He said it sure didn't look that way when he saw her with by the way who was the family destroyer? A guy from out of town she had met while out with the friends while I was gone. Where he from, stay, phone number and who Bill Carinton does he work for? George said he would talk later. George asked a friend to watch the children. Then found the guy darn if he was in the bar at his motel dancing with a woman Dina that George knew was married so he took pictures. He didn't have the husband's phone not knowing him that well but called around till he got it and sent the pictures. The husband Bob called George asking questions then thanked him saying he was coming would George stay. Sure thing. When Bill and Dina stopped dancing sat for a short got up walking towards Bill's room. I was in the lobby waiting for Bob he walked in at the perfect moment I said come on just as they got to the room fumbling with the card he saw them he went running just before the door shut he kicked it open and the fight was on. I pulled Bob off saying it wasn't worth it. He said his children would be the ones hurt the worst. George pulled Bob from the room Dina was following and fell in the hall. Ended up she was drugged. George said he was tolled it was to late to check Deb for drug's but he had them check anyway and yes it still showed. Bill was arrested. Both families worked it out

A commenter or ask what the story this was eerily similar to similar to. Here ya go.

Next chapter should be where he break up's with her.. Tell her that he saw them and then fucks another girl in front of her.. And she should feel pretty bad about it as she didn't tell that she cheated on him..

A better name for the story would have been: "My Cheating Girlfriend Seduced My Roommate". A good story for the cuck enthusiasists, and a headshaking wonder to others. A little more detail about the characters would have benefited the plot. Readers were told nothing about the narrator boy friend other than he was just out of college with a job and "was unattractive looking". Is he rich or the most charming man in the city? We can assume he wasn't a great athlete or she wouldn't have gone so bonzo over the super fit Mark. Likewise about the narrator's cock size and performance in bed; he seemed adequate to average at best. So how did he attract this girl who seemed to be a cross between a fitness contest contestant, beauty pageant winner, and a cosmetic model, with gorgeous hair and boobs used as molds by plastic surgeons? Plus she is an exhibitionist with the morals of a paid escort. Depending on the point of view, she is either a cuck's dream come true, the biggest slut in the city or a lying manipulative bitch who will abuse and dominate her boyfriend or husband. Either way, she is a terrible girlfriend for a guy nearly "brought to tears" by her eagerness to tease and cheat. Poor Mark was merely a scapegoat for the narrator's inability to demand respect from his girlfriend. Mark, the roommate, might even be considered the real victim in the story. Other than knocking on the door and enjoying the views enthusiatically offered him, Mark did nothing until the last night when it can be assumed the girl threw herself at him. She's the one who did the stripping, parading around, rushing to answer the door, and barging into the bathroom - while the boyfriend mutely accepted it. Pease don't write a sequel. The boyfriend is to pitiful to throw her out and tell Mark "it didn't work out, you have to leave too." So the sequel would be a predictable series of humiliation. Just write another story to explore the conflict between voyeurism of a partner and jealousy of a loved one.

Seems to me that Mark having a super perfect body is as much a reason for her to cheat as a woman having a good ass or great tits is an excuse for a man to cheat. Add her bf having lackluster stamina, and being "not attractive" and why wouldn't she? The real question is why did she ever get entangled with the bf in the first place?

Do next chapter. Sounds like a real slut. She has sex with other guy's not men in my book. Have him man up and throw her to the curb.

The story overall is pretty bad, between details of the characters being bare bones, the fact the girlfriend never had a reason to cheat beyond Mark having a muscular body as well as the boyfriend lasting 5 minutes one time, not enough to justify cheating and we never get to see how any character feels besides the boyfriend. Yet again another terrible story on Literotica with almost no details and lack of immersion.

I LIKE your comments.

However I disagree with two statements you made:

(a) In my opinion he DOESN'T gets off on the humiliation: he tolerates it as a price he has to pay to have a cheating girlfriend. I was in that boat myself; my 1st wife was openly cheating on me in a small isolated community in nothern Canada. Everybody and his brother knew she was having sex with other men. The more she was cheating on me the more she was turning me on. I had already stopped loving my wife by that time but she was turning me on more and more. Luckily for me my wife fell in love with another man & left me.

My point is that a voyeur boyfriend or husband need not be a wimp. When I first saw my wife letting another man caress her bare thighs & kiss her upper arm, I totally froze: I was in a hypnotic trance of sorts, paralysed to think, let alone act. I felt like a spectator, not like a husband whose wife is messing around at that very moment.

(b) In my book this is a five-star story. Since you admitted it deserves 4 stars, it is not a big deal.

He is not only stimulated by his girlfriend exposing herself, but is also stimulated by her fucking other guys. He gets off on the humiliation. I don’t understand it, but won’t knock other’s kink. I wasn’t a big fan of this story. I rated it 2 Stars some months ago, but if Literotica would let me, I would change it to a 4 if only for the graphic sex and the sheer brazenness of Becky.

Your story depicts me when I was in my late teens & early 20s: at the time, I thought I was a wimp. My girlfriend was agressively flirting with other guys before my very eyes;

she seldom (if ever) protested when a guy was petting her bare knee or thigh while talking with her.

I was mad at myself for not being able to stand up for myself. Little did I know that I had a very strong voyeur side, of which I was not aware as yet. My voyeur side was affecting my thinking & my decision making: consequently I was only too happy to accept all her explanations...

I remember losing my girlfriend to my best friend when she realizes I was a sissy dick and he was a man. One night we went on a long drive to eat in another town and they made love right beside me under a blanket. What could I do but keep driving and act like I did not know or care but we all knew I knew. I eventually gave up trying the be a man and just became the sissy cock sucker I needed to be to be happy.

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Obviously this is a popular story and theme. I’m not sure exactly when I started liking these things but I have as long as I can remember. Married three times and wanted everyone of them to be a total slut at times. First did end up fucking other men but never told me till later. With her it was an anger thing to hurt me, she did very much. Two did whatever she wanted, 15 years younger very wild. Three was psychotic.

But my thing was watching. I loved seeing blackmen take the woman I was married to and use her till she totally gave In and enjoyed being a blackcock slut. It’s the lowest hottest nastiest a white woman can get and I love it.

If you have a strong voyeur/cuck-wannabe side, you are not a wimp,

YOU ARE KINKY! Most people do not realize that.

In particular this story quite accurately depicts innermost world of a voyeur/cuck-wannabe boyfriend or husband.

Roommates are always good fun. Love that she tries to play it off like it's no big deal and shes doing it for him. Only wish hr resisted a bit more without saying anything and maybe didnt get hard once or twice. But the lying in the end is right on my fence: id love to see her either confess to it seductively in an expansion, or even reveal that she knew he was watching or maybe just continue her promiscuity and be blatant and have her catch him watching but not say anything and her use that to fuel her "this is for you" ideology

It’s hard to break up with a hot girlfriend because she’s a slut. That’s half the fun, if she was someone else’s girlfriend he would be all over it. The one thing that you can’t stop is a slut from fucking, it’s to much fun. Learn to live with it, obviously he likes it. The only thing to do is reside her as long as you want then invite a black friend over. Setback and watch them start working her over. She’ll get turned into a blackcock slut that will only be able to get satisfaction from being used and dominated by several at a time. Then just laugh and walk away,she will never get away and have a normal life.

With all of the rave comments about this story there must be something wrong with me. The boyfriend is something of a wimp and lets Becky walk all over him. Nothing wrong with the roommate as he is only responding to Becky's advances. She is obviously a cheater since she told him everything except that she did the roommate. Can't be trusted. Kick her to the curb. Unless he is a cuckold and enjoys the humilation.

On a serious note done girlfriends & dome wives have a turbo charged sex drive. They should be given the Hall Pass from time to time.

I gave my wife a permanent Hall Pass but she used it only 5 times in 15 years.

I LOVE IT.

The story is INTENSELY EROTIC.

It also is TOTALLY REALISTIC.

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Trust me guys, it is so hard to break up with a cheating girlfriend if DEEP DOWN you have a voyeur/cuck-wannabe side. You usually are NOT AWARE that you are into that stuff.

I still remember vividly when i first saw a man's hand on my girlfriend's bare boobs. She & i were on vacation. She joined a beach volleyball team. The team was co-ed. I went to find them but my girlfriend was not there. I walked on alongside the sand beach. I entered the topless section. There she was on the half empty beach with a male teammate of hers. They were locked in an embrace & he was gently caressing her bare boobs, wispering something on her ear.

Inside my psyche i felt a tsunami of emotions but the main one was being in an hypnotic trance. I observed both them & myself as though i had an out-of-body experience & was watching everything from above. I WAS LIKE A RABBIT CAUGHT IN HEADLIGHTS, totally paralyzed.

That week i was unwillingly sharing my girlfriend with her teammate. I played dumb. To me she was never sexier than on that vacation. To me she was the sexiest woman in the Universe.

Two months later, my girlfriend was gone from my life.

But my voyeur/cuck-wannabe side stayed a part of my psyche & my personality forever.

clarkoverns is a very good writer.

His (or her) stories a erotic, & short & sweet.

They are aldo straight to the point.

His girlfriend & he are a match made in heaven.

She is an exhibitionist, she has an outgoing pesonality, & if she likes a guy she will go all the way.

He has a very strong voyeur/cuck-wannabe side. He gets s kick out of her being naughty.

THE GIRLFRIEND IS A KEEPER!

I got very hot reading your sexy story. I think it's a cute story for a short one. I would really be intrigued if you could get farther in to the meat of the situation. Like, " Would it turn you on more if you secretly watched him put that big tool in me?" Or ask him if he would be turned on if I were to let him fuck me, or other senerios like that. Oh well, you are the author. I believe you could cum up with more sexy mental pictures than I.

I can only understand the haters by understanding that they disagree with their own predilections and urges. Otherwise, why would they read these stories, and then read them again and again?

I thought this was a revenge story, I'd have kicked seven shades of shit out of him and dumped that whore

Bravo!

Here's another example of an author who doesn't finish the story. I agree with the other anonymous author. The voyeur/boyfriend should have done something. ABSOLUTELY no self respecting male would stand for that or the weak lies from the girl. That's why I hated this story so much. They both would have been on the street by the AM. As an investment banker the roommate should have been able to afford his own place anyway...then the girlfriend could escape and get pregnant without bringing the boyfriend in the middle her craziness and her claims of "I did it all for you". Man you've got to get more creative than this. This is just crazy mess.

Either finish the story or stop writing mess like this. What a waste of time.

Hot Hot story.

I am 18 college freshman and my roommate and girlfriend flirting with each other a lot. It's definitely hot to watch them and my girlfriend and I have great sex afterwards.I have always wondered if she's thinking about him but I'm not sure I really want to know the answer.

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Above anon says that the juxtaposition of characters created

"a perfect-storm situation where erotic dreams can come true."

The same anon also said that "(t)here was not a single boring sentence in the story.

Every word of each scene totally made sense in the context of the storyline."

In my book a voyeur boyfriend and an exhibitionist girlfriend is a match made in heaven.

Enter: sexy, arrogant & unscupulous roommate.

All ingredients are there for a perfect-storm situation where erotic dreams can come true.

There was not a single boring sentence in the story.

Every word of each scene totally made sense in the context of the storyline.

All of the above was crafted by Clarkoverns.

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To the author:

BRAVISSIMO!

Whether or not he was spying, she was definitely fucking someone else. I think that trumps being suspicious of someone who's aggressively looking for strange dick. I wouldn't have a room mate or a girlfriend after that night and they'd damn well know why cause I'd have busted down his door and thrown both of their asses out of my house right then and there. The reality does not hold that there are that many would be cuckolds out there. I think the majority of men would kick some ass in the same situation

so I don't think we'll see it, but if ever a story screamed out for a chapter 2 this one is it. Thanks for the great work.

:)

The boyfriend is finding out that he has a very pronounced voyeur/cuck-wannabe side.

The society at large expectss him to act one way but his voyeur side dictates a different pattern of behavior. In the eyes of many he is a wimp, whereas he subconsciously wants his girlfriend to fuck the roommate.

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!

The story line is believable, realistic... & VERY EROTIC.

You can't go wrong if you read it. It reads well.

Beccy sounds like my first wife - she would flirt with guys - she would have a short crop top on& let them play with her tits & tongue kiss her while I watched them

Love to watch girl tease. Very sexy story.

Yes, anon, you are right.

It is hard to be in a relationship with a girl who is very attractive and very adventurous and has a strong libido: man will be hitting on her all the time and she can not keep saying No forever.

This story is my cup of tea. Five stars!

Are you stupid?

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The story is very EROTIC! It is totally realistic (& then some!)

If you are into cheating wife/girlfriend stories, this story is for you.

The girlfriend is not a total slut: she is ADVENTUROUS; she is an EXHIBITIONIST too.

Her boyfriend is discovering his own VOYEUR SIDE. He will first have to be fully aware of it if he is to come to terms with it.

Some girlfriends will cheat when they have a chance if the other guy turns them on!

The girlfriend in this story is sexually attractive & outgoing.

She knows that when opportunity knocks you can't say come back later!

What her boyfriend will learn in time is this:

For ordinary girls, opportunity knocks once; for the very sexy ones, it knocks time & again! He is in for a bumpy ride. C'est la vie.

Wonders how the author felt as he watched his roommate fill his girlfriend with his manly & spermy cum.

Bet the author's penis fell flaccid as he realized his gal desired his roommate's impressive penis over his & how his friend so enjoyed fucking her sweet pussy, which by all rights should've been his penis.

Mark has a superior body, an enormous cock, and super-potent balls. Becky is a goddess. It is the natural order that superior Mark has his way with her. He can drive her to ecstasy in a way the narrator could not dream of doing. Naturally the narrator will hate Mark for taking his girl, will envy Mark's infinite superiority, will acknowledge reluctantly that Mark is entitled to her, and, most galling, will lust for Mark's superior cock. He will worship Mark and Becky in the most degrading ways to show he recognizes his own inferiority and will be grateful to them for letting him do so. I'd love to see a second chapter in which the inevitable course plays out.

should have enjoyed the show. they were just having fun and she came back to you so you should have just went with it and not gotten so hurt. should have jack hammered her pussy to pay her back though

both of them would be gone in a New Your minute, or I would.

I have had a very pronounced voyeur side since age 18.

It must be very nice to live in a ménage à trois.

Too bad you never did any more chapters

cowardly M*******ker he should interrupted the events and kicked them both out.

telling GF and ex roomie to get their clothes out by noon or they were going to trash.

I would have kicked them out naked and thrown them the very necessities-pants, shirt and shoes

It takes all kinds to make the world.

Some girlfriens & some wives are naughty & slutty.

However, thay make this world a more interesting place!

Kick that GF out of the house n his room mate too..

Or rather beat the shit out of the room mate while he us sleeping... n that whore of a GF is probable best he rent her to some nigga n get money for her whoring...

The story is erotic.

Some comments are overly judgemental, discuss morality in a story that is about one roommate having sex with the other roommates GF.

Guys, let them be, (a) it's just a story, & (b) it takes all sorts to make a world.

He does her right then, and after he takes her to marks room, where he mentions having witnessed the fun in the living room. He says its a great idea for Mark to 'use' her after he has then for them to take her together. Marks jaw drops. since they have both had her one at a time they do the menage...She is ecstatic. he leaves her in marks room after...no no its ok, you can take her in the am without me if im still asleep. He omes in in the morning and begins taking her -- pulling on her nipples roughly as he does...Mark wakes up and watches for a few before going to te bathroom. mark returns jst as he finishes in her, still pulling and twisting her nippls.

he moves out of her...her face brightened when mark came back in..mark shoves her legs up over her head ad shoves into her anus. Voyerman grins when she yells, Mark pounds her for a long time before pulling out and finishing in her pussy. they go to the kit hen for breakfast and during breakfast becky glows but looks a little nervous, too.

in the living room they lean her over the sofa while voyerman takes her pussy and mark faces her onthe other sdie of the sofa as he has her sucking him off. Voyerman begins to really like the idea of her having no choice. This continues for a few weeks, with that weekend setting the tone. V-man ana mark discussed the situation and consider marriage to keep her there but decide no...but they make her live there, during marks parties he ipenly fondles her body when vman is out of the room (agreed by vman and mark) after a few of these parties, vman follows the plan and ciomesback into the room while mark is fondling her. he sits besdie them and joins in the fondlign in front of all th guests, They push her over and marks begins pounding her and vman sits on her face, shoving in his dick. The guests gape and watch entranced. once they finish becks tryes to get up and leave but they laugh and hold her there. vman begins his favorite fdonding which is twistin her nipples..mark grins and pinches and twists her clit. One of the guests, Greg, notes that three could play at time...all laugh ,,, even becky tries a weak laugh. the couples present have begun making out and the others are all single guys. mark motions to becky with a flip of his wrist, while vman says be our guest. Becky begins to protest, but vman says oh for heavens sake becky, we know what you are and you do too... the other guests laugh at this and greg loweres himself onto becky. his hands grab her tits at the base as vman has continued pinch and pull on her nipples, now bright red instead of pink in the areas not dark from his frequent rough pinching. Greg talks to vman and mark as he fucks her. when he mentions (with a huge grin) hoping his taking a 'turn' wont leave her una ble to care for them later, they laugh. They tell him of their use of her and how on weekends they often use her numerous times. becky has tears running from her eyes at the humiliation of being made to appear to be a slut. vman notices and asys awwww, then puts his hands over her eyes and rubs the tears over her face and then on her stomach. Greg gasps and comes in her, he ejects stream after stream of seman into her before collapsing onto her. Mark pushes at him a bit and says our turn now...

after she is wiped off they pull her onto ther side and vman pushes into her pussy and mark takes her rear, they are punding hard --mostly for show. Another guest, Rob, comes up and pushed into her mouth. The other coupl4es at the party are fasinated but as 1am had arrived, they left, having been invited to a party endingh at that time. once the three in her finish, Mark asks for rob and greg to r3emain and says to the others he is reminding them of the next party...that night to begin at eight. The other guys leave and greag moves back in when mark pulls out. rob and greg are delighted to have turns with that fabulous body and fuck her over and over a long as they last...with vman and mark taking a turn. becky is blub bering but no one even speaks to her to listens to her. mark and vman goto their beds and sleep leaving her with rob and greg.

in the morning she is covered with semen and greg is sleeping on top of her with rob sleeping at her side. After all showered, she is not allowed to dress. rob introduces bomdage in to the conversation the 4 men are having. Brcky blanc hes. She is on extend3d leave from her job, having been talked into it by Mark druing a fuck session at the beginning of the arrangwmant that mark and vman had decided on. She had not thought they were serious about her new position especially as the men had also been disgussing marriage between her and vman with mark accomanying them on the honey moon...whichthat discussion had done its work as it kept her appesed at the beginning untill she was moved in and on leave from her job. They guys decide to go out for a beer, but when becky goes to get her clothes, they iform her she is staying there. They lock her in the bathroom. They return an hour later with some girls they had picked up, they let her out of the bathroom giving her her purple pj top skimpy purple thong. she is made to cook dinner as they all are kissing and making out with their dates, who think she is their roommate.

they soon say goodbye to thier dates, some making plans to meet up again to go out on dates..including Mark. Rob returns to his earlier topic of bondage and introdeuces some experineces he has had...also mentioning s&m. the other three guys dont seem to have an interest in this. Rob pushes her over the arm of the sofa and begins taking her roughly in the rear, digging his fingers deep into her tits too pull her back into him when he thrusts all the way in. they guys grin an njoy the show, then greg slaps his forehead...grabs ihis cell phone and begins recording the fucking. mark gets his and records too. becky is trying to say no to this new aspect of her realtionsip with vman and mark, but is still ignored. the guys all take turns with her in this position, some in the pussy an dsome in the rear...rob went twice before they put her over the large ottoman and begin taking her 2 at a time. they keep it up at a steady pace until about 7pm when they get ready for that night's party. About 730 the ones ivited from the parth last night begin to arrive. Vman is getting dresses but mark is asnwering the door, vman stpes out and says to tell everyone to make themselves at home and help themselves to anything they like, in the kithen or the living room. No snacks or drinks are put out in the living room, only becky is there, being fuvked again by Rob. by 8, nine more guys have arrived for that saturdqy night.

it was a long saturday and sunday for becky, as they all stayed over and many videos w3re made, which were shown at the parties they became known for each weekend.

I LIKED THE STORY

4.3/5.0 * = 86% = A

I have been a voyeur since i remember.

A good buddy of mine likes to touch my GF's knee with his index finger when he talks to her. I imagine him massaging her thighs and buttocks.

I have NOT told my GF what turns me on. I do not want to lose her respect. I know i should tell her. I know i should be what i am.

your gf had been fucking with him for a long time before you found out . nice story .

are you still with her :) ?

Make a nice ex-lax sandwich for both Mark and the cheating cunt and then grease the toilet bowl seat! Next,beat the shit out of Mark and dump the cheating twat,making sure that you spread the word that she was not to be trusted and had several STDs!

clarkoverns introduces us skillfully to the characters. Build-up is done masterfully. The circumstances and characters put together amount to a "perfect storm".

Some people misunderstood the boyfriend's character. The girlfiend's too.

He is a voyeur. He can't help it. She likes to tease and likes to try other men's dicks.

Will she be a good wife? It's hard to tell. Chances are she will be a very good wife: she will fuck on the side but not excessively & because she is pretty her husband will forgive her should he ever find out.

She definitely can make 2 men happy, she is sexy & full of energy.

I HONESTLY BELIEVE SHE IS A KEEPER & WOULD MARRY HER.

Roommate and girlfriend are gone, or I would be. You don't need this kind of shit in your life. Once a cheater always one, if you cannot trust her now cannot in the future.

He should have put on his bigboy pants and nipped this in the bud when it started.

Some of the comments are so strong because they don't like the characters, but it is excellently written, nobody would have an issue with your technical skills at all.

Even though it has been about five years, I advise you to do a follow up, the cliffhanger is good but try to give your fans satisfaction!

All the best!

Her slutty behavior simply saves him from getting serious with her. It's SO easy to dump a cheating girlfriend! Just remind her not to let the door hit her in the ass on her way out. And the hard on? Give me a break. Jackoff you idiot! And then start thinking about how to get some revenge on both of them. It should be easy. Neither one is the brightest bulb out there. This whole story was dumber than a rock. Cardboard characters acting without rhyme or reason. Just awful.