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All Comments on 'My Roommate's Strange New Appendage'

by Immortan_Jain

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice but dissapointing

Good start but im sad not to see it go further.

KantariiKantariiover 7 years ago

So, was her name supposed to be spelled "Gem" or "Jem". It was kinda confusing? Or is it meant to be two separate people? Not sure. Can you please clarify?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Oh my fuck......... seriously,who in the fuck talks like that? The story was impossible to read and understand. Nope, didn't bother trying to force myself to finish reading it. You really should consider using an editor on your next endeavor🐾

j0hn3rv1nr0g3rsj0hn3rv1nr0g3rsover 7 years ago
get ericka to find gem a boy friend!!!!

so many possibilities with this short story i want more

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

good so far keep working on it this could get itresting

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Part 2

Yo write part two like now!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
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finish it!

SmittyNZSmittyNZover 5 years ago

A good start that then went nowhere

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Waiting for this society of men to all become trans-women like God intended.