by BarbieLez
I would not listen to any negetive feed back. Your story is fine. You did a good job and you should be proud of it.
Stop trolling the Lesbian Sex stories for your Jolly Wankers you misogynistic prick. You're too damned self-righteous to be reading lesbian erotica. Go peg Bill O'Reilly & leave your hateful shit elsewhere!
;-)
Erin
Very cute story! Great stripper fantasy. Obviously a subject you've put some thought into hee hee. Well done :)
A little more a build up would be nice, like the lesbian stripper angle.