My Saving Grace Pt. 08

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Author's Notes:

Thank you all for reading my stories! This series has been a lot of fun to write! In some ways, it was even more fun than "Hannah's Hero" was. You readers are the reason for that! Without your comments and messages driving me on, I wouldn't bother to post anything. So thanks again!

This chapter will be the last one in the "My Saving Grace" series, but it WILL NOT be the last you hear about Kevin and Grace! I intend to start a new story line for this amazing brother and sister. I'm thinking of calling it "A State of Grace," or something similar. (By now you should all know how much fun I have with puns, names, and word games!) I will be sure to put their names in the story description, so you will see.

I'm doing this because, I feel that "My Saving Grace" was about the two of them discovering their love for each other and deciding it was something worth keeping – and fighting for! Their future, building a life and a family of their own, Kevin getting his degree and launching his career...I think that adventure deserves it's own, separate story line. However, as you should all know by now, I care what you readers think. So please let me know your opinions on the subject with your comments and P.M.s.

For right now, my real life is calling me, and I'll have to give it my full attention for a little while. Fortunately, I'm told that there is free wi-fi available at the job site, and it's pretty reliable. (That's pretty rare, in my experience, but it's welcome!) So just maybe, I may post something while I'm working. I have to do SOMETHING to keep my mind off of how much I miss my family, after all. So be safe, all of you, and I hope to post again ASAP!

- CM

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kaotic2kaotic25 months ago

I just finished this and I have to say it's amazing. Thank you for writing and sharing this. Now I have to read the rest.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

This is by far, the best story I have ever read. I’m 51 year old man.and a lot of had me crying like a little kid. Most of it felt like I was there beside them, experiencing it with them. Except for the brother and sister, a lot could be related too. Then everything he did just for the whole love, was truly just for her. Congratulations on a very well written story.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Well this was a truly memorable one. So happy they got their happy ending (or the start of one at least). I knew Trent was bad news but turning into a murderous psychopath... damn. I can't even say it's not plausible because people can be goddamn crazy, especially a clearly unstable guy like that is pushed and pushed. I guess he just snapped. Glad Kevin was able to remember his lessons when it came down it and saved all of their lives. I'm looking forward to reading the A State of Grace series next.

Aussie1951Aussie195110 months ago
Loved it

Great storyline from start to finish. I was a little disappointed with his parents attitude, I thought at the end when he saved so many of the family they may have relented at the funeral and accepted their unconditional love for each other. Perhaps in time they may …⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

100% love it , I love how , the main character and his love love for grace his everything, this isn’t just a incest story this is a love story

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 1 year ago

---> "Okay, detective," the guard replied, also giving Trent the eye. "Should we see him out to the waiting

---> room, to make sure he doesn't get lost, considering the emotional turmoil he must be feeling?"

---> "I think that might be best, Officer Adams. Thank you. I'll be sure to mention your attention to your

---> duties to your supervisor."

---> "Thank you detective," he replied. To Trent, he gestured toward the doors to the waiting area. "This

---> way please, sir."

---> "I know the way, you fucking rent-a-cop!" Trent snapped, as he turned towards the doors.

Okay, so in real life I have been both an armed security officer and a licensed police officer. While I personally tried to be as courteous as possible when dealing with Security Guards, I was only one out of a hundred cops who did so because I had experience from BOTH SIDES.

But in the real world, 99.99% of Policemen carry a hatred for Security Guards. There's a plethora of reasons for this, but the biggest issue most likely comes down to money. Police Officers rely heavily on their "extra jobs" to make enough money for their comfort items such as a newer car or maybe a boat for recreation. Maybe a higher mortgage to get that house in the nicer neighborhood. Places that are at risk can obtain a Security Guard at a lower rate than it would take to get an off duty Policeman.

Policemen generally treat Security Guards with a great deal of disrespect in spite of the fact that nearly every armed Security Guard on duty would rush in to assist the cop that just insulted him. Next time you write an interaction between the two entities like this, please get it correct. Your dialog wasn't even close to believable from my personal experience. 4/5

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wonderful story. Loved all chapters. Looking to find the other stories about them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Poor kevin, was "head over heels" in love with his Girlfriend of 6 years, then she cheats on him and they hadn't even had sex all those years, if he wasn't with kelly he would been hitting grace the day he was legal.

Although this was mentioned as a funny as instance in the story, but the fact the the guy kelly cheated on kevin was the same guy who fucked his now gf/sister in the past lol

ThandrosThandrosover 2 years ago

What an amazing love story! Thank You!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great story. Please keep writing. Wonderful.

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