All Comments on 'My Secret Lover Ch. 01'

Fairytale,

Very nice story! I liked it - being a Daddy Dom myself - and I see a lot of potential for this story! It was very well written! How much of it is true? Keep up the good work! 🙂

Normally I like to write in a comment about how the story has good flow or narrative ( both of which the story has, don't worry :p ) and then end it up with some constructive criticsm. However on reading this there was only one thought that came to mind ...

... finally a Daddy Dom and Little story thats actually a DDLG story and not just a masquerade for a traditional BDSM relationship where the sub occasionally calls their Dom daddy!

Loved it :D

5/5 stars

Thanks you guys!

This story is not true In any way sadly lol.

As far as the comment about the reality thank you, I am a little myself and sometimes when reading stories I experience what you are talking about. My goal was to not only show this side of a DDlg relationship, but also spread the love.

It just isn't my thing and even the well-written stories leave me cold. This is so well done, though. There's a real story and the DDlg stuff is framed in a way that feels natural and makes sense. Please continue the story! I can't wait to read more. (you've got a book in the making here---no pressure or anything, right?) ;-)

I loved it!! Please tell me that the next chapter is coming VERY SOON.

The next two chapters are already completed And submitted :). So ypu shouod be seeing them soon. Just waiting on them to be approved by the website. Thanks you guys again for your support

This is exactly what my fiance and I like! I never realized this was a thing though.. I love it. I love my daddy Dom and how safe and loved he makes me feel even when I'm in a crisis. I cannot wait to read more chapters of this story, it's very well written! Thank you for letting me see this..

This is very much like me and my daddy but we're both in high school and there's a longer distance between us sadly.

Really sweet start. You don't need quotation marks around every sentence though :)

Might want to fix "my least favorite subject was over history", specifically the history bit. Otherwise, quite wonderful ^-^