All Comments on 'My Secret Lover Ch. 02'

by FairytaleBaby

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
So Sweet

I loved it, it's so sweet and cute. I gushed in a comment previously about how nice it is to see a sweet DDLG story and I maintain that gushing. Really enjoyable and can't wait to read more :)

5/5 stars

FairytaleBabyFairytaleBabyabout 7 years agoAuthor
To so sweet

Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it , and thank you for coming back to read chapter 2. Chapter 3 has been submitted, so you should see that one soon. :)

paeonie13paeonie13about 7 years ago
Uncanny

The similarities between this ongoing story and my life are almost unbelievable! I love seeing my life from this perspective though. I can't wait for chapter 3!

FairytaleBabyFairytaleBabyabout 7 years agoAuthor
To uncanny

Thank you for your support. I'm sorry that you are going through similar things, but am glad you are enjoying the story.

Stay strong it gets better I promise :)

Mil200Mil200about 7 years ago
I love it!

This is such a good story! Please keep writing more! I don't find many ddlg stories and when I do half of them aren't good but I really like this one so I hope you finish it to the end!

FairytaleBabyFairytaleBabyabout 7 years agoAuthor
To mil200

So glad you like the story. Thanks for the support, chapter 3 is available to read now! And yes I do plan on finishing it to the end :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
i love it so

I love yours stories and the way you write, they're so lovely and wonderful :)

MattKesterMattKesterover 6 years ago
Excellent story

The story is excellent, but the grammatical errors - mainly punctuation - are distracting. I would encourage some editing.

Having said that, the story flows well and logically. I fell in love with Elizabeth and identify with Gabriel. Without the distraction of the grammatical errors, I would give this five stars.

I want to encourage the author to write much more!

StrixalucoStrixalucoalmost 2 years ago

There's something odd, the next (and previous) chapter doesn't show up here as they should.

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